All Comments on 'Go-Go Control Ch. 01'

I enjoyed this, although the broken English - for which you gave an adequate explanation - became a little tiresome; you also used 11 &'s in your copy and that is not good practice.

A good story overall - I look forward to reading More Control - thank you. Four stars for a good effort.

Nice story. Let us know how it continued.

Did it develop into a relationship or did she just take your money?

One last thing: Does the story take place in Pattaya Thailand? :)

I love Asian Fem Dom and this story had superb interaction and scenes.

Well done!