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to be continued?
Please continue it's a really good story and you can go far with it., really loved it
Wonderful start ,,,
Great little story, but this could become so much more. Please let us know how this continues to unfold.
Make Cindy Submit!
Let's hope Cindy can't get enough of Serenity and ends up submitting to her!
More please!!
This was good...It was very short, but still good.
We need to have more descriptions and definitely a sequel.
....I can see this developing into a nice little love story.
This story
I read this story before awhile ago on asstr I think. Are you sure this is your story?
found it on asstr
This story is from Asstr, just go to the site and search serenity walker, that being said maybe the author just wants to work on it again on a new site, if so do continue
Previous submissions
Yes, it's my story. I submitted it to asstr.org. I also have it posted (though slightly different) in my own web page/blog. I do understand your suspicion though, so feel free to send an e-mail to the e-mail address associated with the story on asstr and I will reply and confirm that is is in fact me.
More
Could you please continue this story ? I'd like to see Cindy forcing Serenity to please her every time she feels like it. :-)
The beginning
As I was reading it I could almost see it happening. Nice little short story. I wish that you were.more graphic in your description of their body parts. I liked it anyway. Looking forward to the next chapter. As always Betsey
Hi BitterIchor,
I really like your second story "Something" and I hope that you continue writing a chapter 2, but again you need to develop the characters more.
A good start, more than worth 5 stars....
Gay Kat.
Chapter 2
I've read your story a lot of time and i'm always hoping for you to make a chapter 2. I love the bully/loser relationship. Well i'll wait :-)
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