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Freedom Ch. 01

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous02/11/14

Great

Excellent and thanks

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by Anonymous02/11/14

Fucking rubbish

Condoms wont sticking up the writers ass

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by FreedomBase02/12/14

Worth It . . .

It's the philosopher's stone she leaves at the end: "I am a slave, a slave of my own sick mind and my desires . . . a puppet in the hands of the lust and nothing else..."

It goes to show, every one of us has an addiction to something.

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by Anonymous02/12/14

Why is he her brother but called dada, is this is stolen/changed daughter dad incest that just someone changed? Or is this some Mid East pet name thing?

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by Anonymous02/12/14

In some of the Indian languages, elder brother is called 'Dada'

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by prop6902/12/14

Great first story

Hope you will follow up with another Chapter.

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by Anonymous02/18/14

Sexy older brother

The older brother is Indian -- give him a sexy hairy chest, a softly haired manly chest for her boobs to rest against!

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