Lollipop

interesting

perhaps a little beyond me ... or i dont know really... i couldnt really follow your style of writing very well. thought i was sorta of reading a script or a stream of consciousness lol. dont know how thats erotic horror but ok. in fact didnt feel any eroticism(to each their own i guess).hmmm. these arent necessarily negative feedback, it wasnt crap, so keep writing.

Well I liked it. I thought it was droll, irreverent, and even charming in a baffling way. The fluid prose is actually very pleasing once you get a little of it in your system.

Useless garbage. Besides, University of William Shatner doesn't even exist. No wonder you are such a feeble writer.