All Comments on 'Lollipop'

perhaps a little beyond me ... or i dont know really... i couldnt really follow your style of writing very well. thought i was sorta of reading a script or a stream of consciousness lol. dont know how thats erotic horror but ok. in fact didnt feel any eroticism(to each their own i guess).hmmm. these arent necessarily negative feedback, it wasnt crap, so keep writing.

Well I liked it. I thought it was droll, irreverent, and even charming in a baffling way. The fluid prose is actually very pleasing once you get a little of it in your system.

Useless garbage. Besides, University of William Shatner doesn't even exist. No wonder you are such a feeble writer.

Dear Petty Anony,

At least the good Doctor has a marvelous imagination and comprehensive vocabulary, whereas you don’t. You’ve copied and pasted the same shallow comment to at least four separate submissions. Too difficult to think of anything new to share?