A Watchful Brother Ch. 01

fair

look at the ages

Damn

That was hot. Write more.

FAIL

DDD tits = FAIL plus there is no such thing as DDD tits.
chubby girl = FAIL no one likes a chubby girl.
aal in all it was a total FAIL.

I liked it, but...

you need editing help. Your mistakes could have been more distracting if you had written a longer chapter. In addition, please consult a chart regarding breast sizes in the future. Personally, I would just use terms like big or large and leave actual size to the reader's imagination.

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Fucking rubbish.

did the job

That was amazing, I fucking hate reading and having to get through 6 pages of lead up shit before I can cum..short and sweet. Enough imagery to paint the picture in my head..well done

Good story

As they say keep the presses rolling. Need more chapters.

Ain't family great?

My wife and I had been married about 2 years when, during a hot round of sex one night, she told me how her older brother had always tried to get in her pants. I told her she should be ashamed to leave her brother with blue balls. I insisted that she apologize and beg to make it up to him. She did and remained his slut to use whenever he pleased.

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Nothing like a couple of bottles of wine to heat-up the rape.... I mean incest. Drunk = nonconsent.

Really liked it, can't wait to read more chapters as long as you keep them together exclusively, bringing others in always ruins the story. Thank you

Definitely keep going

MUST be chapter 2 and perhaps more. Get sister pregnant, maybe Mom too.