Catching Mommy: Victoria Wins

Author's note

Hi all,
On Thursday: Olivia wins will be released
On Friday: win win for all will be released

I hope you enjoy...

No To Olivia Wins!

Why should she win?

She was the evil bitch who started it all!

Win Win MIGHT be ok, but I still don't think she should benefit at all.

great job

I was rooting for Victoria -- glad you went that way --makes for a much hotter story line when the underdog has her day.

Pick an ending and write it

Multiple choice is for grade school.

Yay

Glad you're doing Alternate endings, I was worried it would just be Victoria winning, atleast I get a good Olivia wins ending.

This ending is fine

I don't like alternative endings because if Victoria handles things differently in the ohers and loses I'm going to think she is stupid for not thinking about joining force with others.
This ending is great. I was routing for Victoria since the beginning. In the story we don't know Olivia well enough to bond with her. In your other stories the dominating person is always around and little by little takes charge of the submissives. Here olivia is too distant to relate too. Why Victoria who is a dom would bow before Olivia?

I will read the Win Win For All because of what I think that one will be. But as the Olivia wining one, nope I ain't going to read it. Bitches like Olivia need to be put in their place. I'm ok it Olivia and Victoria adimting they love each other, stranger shit has been known to happen and I'm ok with that. But as to the Bitch winning nope don't want to read that one.

id read both the others cant wait for olivia wins

k

Catching Mommy: Olivia Wins

Olivia Wins

Interesting that you chose to write Victoria Wins first, maybe you're saving the best for last

Authors note 2

Hi all,
I originally planned to release all three on the same day...literotica decided the order...over a three day span and I thought ... Works for me!

I would have done it alphabetically because I am OCD like that...

im so excited im shaking :D

I'm dying to read the alternate endings I love your stories so very much I've been dying for the conclusion and you where kind enough to give me three choices I LOVE IT!!! can't wait to read the alternates

WOW

Love your work and love this ending...........However i'm pretty sure i will love the other endings as well. Top marks for doing these alternative endings and jesus....i wish i could have sex with your mind as you are fricking great :D

thanx jasmine

i waited for long. i am desperately waiting other parts as well where a natural domme olivia will get victoria on the all four

Thanks for writing this!

Great story! I hope you keep up with stories like this! One of my favorite series on Literotica for sure. I didn't really think Victoria had it in her at first but you kept this ending interesting. :)

Good ending

Although there should've been only one ending with Victoria winning, you made 3 stories to cater to all your fans which is a fair game. But still, this one is the best one as Olivia reaps what she sowed without much far-fetching the original story.
I hope to read more such stories from you in the future.

WOW

That was bloody great, My cocks never been so hard or cum so much :) my wife thanks for a perfect facial, all your stories are.... wow...
Silkstockinglover, you need to publish a book big time
I have to make a profile soon

Awesome

I read it and I think it's only fair if Victoria wins. I love your style of writing, always gets me. Keep up the good work!

Victoria

I'm on for Victoria, I read them all but the better ending was Victoria, I hate snobby rich assholes like Olivia and having Victoria win was MUCH more satisfying.

Team Victoria!

This series was amazing! I loved every moment of it. I'm Team Victoria all the way. I'm glad she got what was coming to her. Also, I'm really happy Victoria and Becka wound up together. I liked them together. Thank you for that. :-)

olivia wins is better than this

Olivia wins is more erotic and dramatic than this one..i wanted Victoria to win but after reading this I realize I'm on Olivia's team. Your stories are very
imaginative and so hot im becoming addictive..

Any Chance of a Sequel (Expansion)?

Any chance of a detailed account of the step-mom, sister etc; fall?

Fantastic story

After reading all 3 endings (and being team Victoria all the way through) I do have to admit that the win win ending was a very good way to end everything. But I do prefer Victoria wins just because people like Olivia piss me off, acting like they're above everyone else.

Your writing style is so good, I love many of your stories, please continue writing and provide all of us domme/sub lovers with amazing plots and characters to fall in love with over and over again

AWESOME

Awesome. Have only recently found your stories but must say this first experience is mind boggling. Creative, inspirational, inter wiving, twists and turns just superb. I think I will be on the road to reading all 176 stories. I am sure it will only be a matter of time before we see a new 2015 series begin.

Love the story grerat sex gave it a 5

if for no other reason hen to dive asshole annony. a little bitch a hard on

I think I liked Victoria wins best because I wanted her to win. However I think that Olivia wins was better written. I'm glad you had to write the endings because to me there was no good way out of this.

Curious how this would look from Olivia's perspective. It seems writing sub is more natural for you. Also we never saw anything but what Victoria saw, so maybe Olivia was reacting the same way she just didn't pick it up. None of the endings are bad but Olivia wins is great that's why I think this might be better if the perspectives wre flipped, overall great story.

Victoria fan!

Victoria wins is my definite preference. Love to see people like Olivia put in their place on their knees! Really nice touch putting her mother in control of her at the end. Bravo for giving Simon a big cock, I enjoy how your nerds tend to end up well hung. I have to admit the story with Victoria submitting to Olivia was very erotic, but it just seems better to have Olivia submit so totally to Queen Victoria! I also liked the aftermath much better. Thanks for your great writing!