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by Anonymous

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by demure10102/10/14

Late for my life...

Indeed.

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by Ashesh902/11/14

Thru' intercourse with hope :

Tremendous concept ; high5-ed !

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by Cleardaynow02/11/14

Trailing after Demure

Really nice subtle thoughts woven together. Do not know how I missed this. Thank you Demure for commenting.

Possibly, it was the short lines (which I am not fond of as a rule) and being tired when I read this first. I still prefer longer lines.

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