Topless Housekeeping

Impatiently Waiting

This was excellent. Don't stop now. Expand this thesis and give us more.

Sman

My house needs cleaning!

Any volunteers? Very sexy story - probably every guy's dream!

Loved it!!

Jenifer,

I absolutely loved it!! Please don't stop, I'd love to read on.

JD

Perfect

Jen,

I loved the story. I can hardly wait to read the next installment.

Thanks for sharing.

outragously good

I thought that your story was very well done.

ned to build more as to the finish you were starting and then it was over can't wait for part two.

hopefully soon

waiting on Part 2

girl this was so hot .... Where is part 2 ???

mmm

very nice story............ :)

Hard to clean!!

Great story, I know it's alway "hard" to clean everything but as long as all the big items are done thats good!!

Thanks,

hattrick

very good

awesome story..

not bad

I think a little more detail would have been nice about him cumming, and what you did afterwards (it kinda "fast forwards). But it was good.

Excellent Passionate Story!!

Great story!!

cheating wife

The wife has no feelings for husband she says she feels no guilt after she just cheated on her husband the husband beeter open his eyes and kick her tail out of the house and tell her now she can cheat door to door .

Sad

Sad to find that 11 of the 12 readers who left comments thought this story about a brain dead cheating wife was good. Amazing the number of horny teenagers who read literotica.
the Ct. Yankee

Very exciting story all the way through.

However, that was in '03 and it's now '07... we're still waiting for part two.
Best to you Jen, and keep writing.
Now, on to your next story.

Nesher

Do these people actually read the stories?

If they did, surely they'd realize there was no cheating involved, that Thomas and Stephan are the same person?

Please post part two. It's a very arousing story. PS: love your other works as well.

part 2

Please I want to read more!!

Cute

Worth the 4 I gave it.

Nice Story

I really liked the story and the surprise at the end was just wonderful. I'm really looking forward to part 2 if you ever get around to writing it.

More!!!!

Cannot wait for part 2!

Topless

Nice story! I shall have to hang around until Part 2 comes out. This story is well written and you get a real feel for who Jenifer is. Much fun!

Thanks
Ted

Still waiting

Hi Jenn -- it's been over a month since I found your stories and, like all the others commenting here, I am waiting for part 2. How long will I have to wait . At my age I might not make it.

Barry

topless housekeeping

great story am certainly looking forward to part 2

problem

there is a problem with scoring the story, it wont register bu I give it a 5