Seven Minutes to Regret

Did Not Like*

Sorry. Good luck on future submissions.

REGRET AND REVENGE

shouldn't lead to a prison sentence, TK U MLJ LV NV

jerk

he was an asshole

She was being a bitch, but that's not illegal.

He's a rapist and that is. No matter how she is (and I think she was just reacted to what a dickhead he was), there was no excuse for what he did. She should have offered top suck him then bitten it off. That's what he deserved. I hope she would go to the police.

Is he the hero of this story?

If so, you are one sick bastard. Bet you've done this to someone in real life too.

Hot

I thought it was good. Short and to the point.

Future Prison Bitch to Bubba

That girl would go report his idiot ass for rape, the kit would prove it and his college career paid for by stupid parents would be over like his future.
All of my nieces get military grade mace as a gift before they head off to college for idiots like that. I also remind them all crotch shots for males and no head shots, the latter will be stopped immediately by the former.

Granted this genre has way too many Criminal Genius Masterminds but this guy was far too dumb to make up fot what should have been a nice change. Its like you were trying to impress on us just how retarded and unlikeable he is and forgot plot and/or good sex scenes in the process.

sad

the base Idea of the seven minutes not bad but the rest of it not so much. Could have been one of those last liners that he was her boyfriend and they'd planned it this way or the like, bu no, just another reason why the whole catagory is disliked in general. on a 1 to 10 maybe a 2 just for the base idea.

Oops...

Hey everybody, thanks for the input. I was trying something new and I guess it didn't work for most of you! I appreciate the honest and helpful feedback. Maybe the next one will be better!
See you around literotica! :)

crap

I mean...REAL crap

One asshole to another.

Don't listen to the haters

It was a good story. I hope you continue. Most of the critics don't like the category so they trash the story. Most of the comments have to do with the category, not the story. If they don't like the category then why read it? Ignore the stupid complainers.

How old are you 12?

I laughed all the way through this one. To think someone would actually publish this assortment of words. Sure makes the other writers read like Shakespeare !!

What a waste of words. Not only is it about a drunk frat boy, it sounds like it was written by a drunk frat boy.

Rape is rape

This was about a frat boy raping a young lady because she didn't want him earlier. Even if she did respond later she clearly said no before he forced him self on her. This story was about one rape already and then he was going to turn it into a gang rape by getting some of his friends. This was a sick story.

You really should listen to the commentors

The comments are about the story. Your statement "You can't orgasm if you aren't turned on." is pure BULLSHIT. Orgasming is a physical reaction. When you grow up, you can ask your girlfriend about that, so until you reach puberty, you really should stop writing about grown up things. All I can fathom here is that some schoolmate of yours embarrassed you during gym class one day and you thought that you could feel better by making up a fantasy where you are the hero. NAH, didn't work. Your classmate was probably right.

these comments are crazy

Hey sorry about your feedback. Obviously the writer is aware that it's a rape scenario... one of the characters makes that point. Some people are into that, so thanks for writing. I thought the ignorant language and thinking of the man made it a more convincing story.

I liked it

It's a non consent story, I don't know what tweedle dee, tweedle dumb and tweedle stupid expected. It's just what I was looking for. And I am a woman. That's so silly to try to get technical on here about whether or not a NON CONSENT STORY is about rape or not.

but i enjoyed it

i like to be the girl although he's a drunk frat man and i hope the story will continue with a gangbang. i'm an asian and my English standard is not good so i won mind about it. i enjoyed masturbating my big clit. i'm shy_n_quite_angel@yahoo.com

A story of rape, pure and simple

But poorly told. Stilted dialogue. Difficult transitions from speaker to speaker. Simplistic and moronic thoughts and acts. Unlikeable characters. Just no fun to read.

Jeez

- nonconsent check
- credible situation....more so than most the stories I have read here.
- portrayal of characters credible....well I was never a drunken entitled fratboy, but I bought it.
- would the guy go to prison yada yada....probably so ...but tbe story isn't about that....and even with those consequences this still happens on the regular.

I really don,t understand the criticisms.