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by FA_JF02/14/14

You have an interesting idea. However, both this and the previous story are stripped too bare. Where is the background story? Each vignette needs more development. The 'report' is a seldom used device and is a great chance for you to add more to the overall story we readers could not know from the fly-on-the-wall moments watching the prisoners.

Keep writing. The more you do, the better you will get.

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