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Rape
That was still rape. I would absolutely love a chapter two in which she went to the police to look for this guy. Please?!?!
loved it
I really enjoyed this story...
Short, Sweet, And To The Point
This was more of a humorous story than an erotic one. I liked the character's dialogue. He is someone who is used to getting what he wants and has no qualms about taking what he desires. You can tell he'd done it before. I giggled quite a bit. I think you should reintroduce this character. Let us as the readers get to know him more....and sacrifice some more victims, why don't you??
Also, don't be shy about getting into more sexual detail. It wins every single time.
It's*
A read.
Yes agree its rape
With such a quick shower, there should still be 'evidence' in her, put the bastard away for a long time.
Why no scent?
There is no description of any scent. He should of licked her pussy and tongued her asshole.
Nice Irony
Nice touch of irony:
"Then I just hung around in the background to ensure that she wasn't molested by some lowlife while asleep."
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