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Vile Bitch & 1/2

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous02/14/14

Well that was strange

Just a little too weird for my tastes.

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by ILienBagby02/15/14

Enjoyed

every paragraph of this happy story. Great job!

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by Anonymous02/15/14

So Good I want More

Hi there ,there are stories some good and some bad ,This one IS really good and I hope you are writing more for this one's part two.I'd read it .thanks for the higher quality stories

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by snath03/04/14

Nice story

This is a nice little story, I really liked it. I would not write another chapter. It was too good.

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by Pulsifer4203/27/14

Hooray

Multiple experiences all tied together in a masterful, realistic, and understandable fashion. Thank you. Write some more stuff please.

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by allenethanm07/16/14

I'm hooked!

I'm gladto see you have lots of stories to choose from. 5 stars.

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by Bestreading07/27/14

Excellent story and characters!!!!

Excellent, fresh story line and engaging to read. Even if it is late and you are nodding off it keeps your attention. Like to see more of these characters certainly but other interesting story lines and characters would be welcome to this reader as well.
Thanks

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by RePhil09/12/14

Gem of a story!

Did you leave the door open on purpose? Dam you! LOL

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by superfeluously_e08/09/15

I'm going to read it because the ending looked kind of good

I initially stopped reading it after I read the following:
"It's Vile Bitch to you, bozo," she sneered, ignoring my hand. "Are you worth a shit as a bodyguard?"

"Let's put it this way Vile Bitch," I snarled, "I could beat the shit out of you and your entire crew in sixty seconds flat, yet I can be as gentle as a lamb in handling people who aren't a threat."

I knew this is all "fantasy" but why would a body guard, who can't find a job, respond to potential employer like this??? Didn't sit well with me because it didn't make any sense.

I'll give it another read and see.

Thanks for posting

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by walrus9010/04/15

Great Fun !!

One of the most fun stories I've read in a long time!

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by gatorhermit03/29/16

Could have been posted in humor...

Except for the time in Russia. Five star read - well-paced story. I liked the line about the tattoo washing off with soap and water.

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