This is pure swill unfit for the lowest of vermin.
Is there some way to score this stuff as less than 1?
Well written, good job! Like any good story, it makes one wonder what is next. There is a minor typo when you refer to Sheikh Abdullah as father in beginning ("daughter of..") and husband later. Ignore the haters and trolls
The writing is a bit stilted, as if trying too hard to be correct you went into excessively formal. The story is interesting, although a bit short. and yes, ignore the trolls. Children will be children.
No one is trolling. The story just sucks sweaty donkey balls. This isn't even a erotic story. So wrong category as well.
Utter swill
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This is pure swill unfit for the lowest of vermin.
Ouch. Painful to read.
Is there some way to score this stuff as less than 1?
Interesting, very unique
Well written, good job! Like any good story, it makes one wonder what is next.
There is a minor typo when you refer to Sheikh Abdullah as father in beginning ("daughter of..") and husband later.
Ignore the haters and trolls
The writing is a bit stilted, as if trying too hard to be correct you went into excessively formal.
The story is interesting, although a bit short.
and yes, ignore the trolls. Children will be children.
Anon
No one is trolling. The story just sucks sweaty donkey balls. This isn't even a erotic story. So wrong category as well.
Garbage
Utter swill
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