Sloppy Seconds

good quick fuck

its a very good quick fuck. i hope u keep writing :)

best kind

What is not to love about a used unsatisfied wanton woman in your presence?? Used and filled can not be described.....it is the best sex any man could ever want.....It is a hard thing to come by, but when you do......oh my..........Great story.......hope there is more to cum, I mean come.........smile

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This was stupid. Where's the character development?

Terrible story,

Terrible writing. It didn't really make much sense. Delete it.
Then go back to school, learn a little English, and then try again. When you completely re-write this, send it to a good editor, and then apply the fixes he/she suggest. Then, if it's good enough, post it again. This time with a proper start, middle and end. Some background to understand the characters, and stop repeating the word bro. Have some respect for your readers, and delete this story immediately.

idiot

For a guy who has a user name with USMC in it you would think that you would have a firm grasp that 1500 occurs in the middle of the afternoon, so the guy could in no way walk out into the night.

OK short story

Shows a lot of potential and good ideas and feelings.

hopefully

you won't write another story

Just fuck and suck

Just a fuck and suck No build up or background, the story sucked!
Oh 1500 is 3:00pm and isn't dark yet

Really a dumb story. How little you must think of your sister to not only love other guy cum all over hear but to fuck her after. Somewhere mom and dad are real proud of these two idiots and one author as well

If it was Alaska during the winter it would be night

Tim had been literally addicted to his little sister's pussy ever since the first time she surprised him in the shower.

I don't know what these negative commenters are yapping about. This was an excellent, original and creative story about sisterfucking by a gifted jarhead in his 30s. I hope that stupid readers won't keep him from further explorations of the fascinating subject of family fucking. His character Tim is like plenty of big brothers nowadays in our sexually liberated society. In years gone by lots and lots of big brothers were strongly attracted to their kid sister's cute little coochie. They'd get hard in their pants and whack off thinking about that sweet slit between their baby sister's legs. Today Alpha lads like Tim go ahead and do something about it. If sis is still a virgin they bust her cherry, knowing that that's the job of a big brother anyway. Tim fucks his sister any old time he feels like it and has himself a great party up her warm wet cunt. I suspect that soon he'll want her all to himself and make inferior cocks off-limits. All that sis really needs is Tim's big hard cock to pound and slam her tight little twat and his heavy loaded brotherly balls to flood her insides with his creamy sperm.

Your rant is better than the story

After reading a story like this one...

...it's easy to see why the Marines are always looking for a few GOOD men.