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Great start, please, please continue!
Oh yes
Please more I would love to read this !!!!
:D
Thanks so much for the feedback! I'm happy to say that the second chapter is already nearly completed :)
More please.
Love it, looking forward to more.
Intense!
This is gorgeous writing! I absolutely can't wait for more!!
That was..magical. More please!
Awesome
And flawlessly edited. A pleasure to read.
That was absolutely lovely
Please do continue it!
Wonderful!
I was pleasantly surprised by this chapter, as these days "slow burn" stories are becoming increasingly rare. Well done, please continue!
Brilliant!
This story was an incredibly good read. Slow burn stories are a rarity these days
PlEASE CONTINUE !
I keep comig back and rereading the same chapters but I would love new ones (:
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