Healing

no background as to why she freaks,but i can guess she was raped or assaulted in some way.is this going to be a threesome thing with her doing both guys from the club? i hope not since if she was assaulted in some way then she wouldnt be into a non-normal relationship that would leave her not in control til she was comfortable with 1 huge guy much less 2.

If her "tragic past" includes being assaulted by a man, which it seems like it is sense she freaked when a man touched her, she wouldn't be comfortable being in a relationship with ONE guy, let alone TWO.

Great Beginning!

It looks like you might have hit a Home Run first time at the plate. Great beginning to story and am looking forward to the next installment.

Love it!!!

Can't wait for CH. 2!!!!!!

I love these stories

Any menage where there's one woman and multiple men in a romantic relationship is really hot! Please don't leave me hanging....

Can't wait to read the next one!!!

well

Its great writing craft.

It appears she has a history of abuse, rape?

So no, involving her with 2 men would be....very very bad. She would be lucky it appears to ever trust just one. That reaction she had shows a lot of damage.

Very good writing, am wondering how you will get her involved with a guy in a believable way.

TOO short and needs a lot of editing.

Thanks For The Start***

But you forgot the story. Waiting for ch 02.