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My Vacation

by34DDasian©
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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous02/15/14

more please

It was amazing...i need more!!!

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by Azrael55602/15/14

This took long enough to post....

but it was worth it to see your work online. I hope you have more planned.

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by OldeSarge102/15/14

Great first submission.

I look forward to more in the future and seeing how your style developes.

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by Anonymous02/16/14

Decent story but need to proof read a bit more. At one point you stated that she had never met him and then later you stated that he was more attractive than she remembered. Overall a very nice story

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by Anonymous04/10/14

i want more

I loved this story. I want someone to fuck me like that i am looking to see more stories from you great job

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by Anonymous06/01/14

Mmmm

Short and sweet but left me wet for mmmmore

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by Anonymous08/30/14

Looking forward to a continuation of this!

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by Anonymous12/15/14

Mmm

Reminds me of my mom's boyfriend, and when he took my virginity when I was younger.

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