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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous02/15/14

WTF is this supposed to be? A story?

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by Anonymous02/16/14

You almost started a story - did you accidentally post your notes for the story instead of the story itself?

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by Anonymous04/27/14

Elaboration

I think that pub should elaborate on the story, maybe add a couple of other chapters. Also maybe you can delete this story and then make it into a bunch of longer stories.

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