All Comments on 'Unanticipated'

Continue! Please!

By all means, continue. A great start. 'Would like to know more about why Ania suddenly turned on to Jake. 'Must have been building up for some time. He is just a real guy, and responds in real guy way to her come-on, sister or not. The way it should be.

she was just teasing him, a tease just partially does a little, just to aggravate. im sick of all these stories turning out good.. it wood be good if he could have sex with his sister

You did take biology in high school didn't you? if so you must have missed the classes about dominant genetic traits. Mom was Lebanese, which means no blue eyes (do not know any truely native Middle-East people with blue eyes). Which means her mom's eye color would have been dominant, even if her dad had blue eyes. There were other incorrect words throughout, as well. Concept has possibilities, but you could use help.

You got a good start which calls for more chapters.

great story. nice build up. need more!

Sorry anonymous, but with a fully Lebanese mom and a blue-eyed English dad, I've got blue eyes. It can happen...

I quoted these lines from this great story because to me a baby sister cupping and cuddling her big brother's balls is one of the sweetest and sexiest things I can imagine. Jake's a very lucky guy to have a sister like Ania, who loves having him blow his brotherly balls down her throat. I have a feeling Jake's going to get even luckier in the sequel. The highly talented author has a penchant for stories of siblings having dirty fun with each other, so I foresee Jake getting to know that cute little slit between his sister's legs with his probing fingers, his slurping tongue, and his big hard cock.

"Polak," is a racial slur. Correctly put, "Polish through and through"

Stick it up your fucking ass hole