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glad you are back
Great story. Much more romantic than I thought it would be. Ivy is a sweetheart.
Cool story! Hope to read of Colton's first time bottoming for Ivy! Or maybe Paul is a little jealous, he's the one who wants his ass reamed by her?
Aww what?
I was totally looking forward to Colton bottoming. You gotta write a chapter of it, please!
You're Back!
Been waiting for you to return, and what a present you bring. Wasn't to into the face-sitting & rimming, but that's just a preference. It was still excellently written, and you've inspired me to finish my own story. See you around, Sugar
Wooohooo!
You're back and with a fantastic new story! You're ability to craft these tender, loving stories with all that hot, steamy sex never ceases to amaze me! I have to admit I was a little disappointed when Colton didn't get bottomed, but I'll take whatever I can get. Here's to hoping another chapter or two comes out soon!
Fabulous, Loved Your Characters...
...And especially liked the transition of thought within Colton. You captured young romance, the "desired" romance so well, a little rough as they learn about making love, and loving each other. Thanks for sharing another gem, and YES we love reading these stories... please keep writing them!
Amazing
Amazing as always. All your stories make me wish I was there taking it. Keep them coming.
Ugly
Just awful.
Returning on a high note
This was a really sweet story. Hot, too, like all your stories, but I do much prefer the ones about love (sappy, but whatevs). The sex was way hotter because the characters seemed really interested in each other beyond being holes to fill. And like a lot of the other commenters, I would love to see more of this pair.
Well done
I really liked this. In two pages you gave me characters that I found interesting, and I thought the sex was good. I've read a number of your stories, and while you do create some similar circumstances, you give us a t-girl that I would really like to know.
great job!
This is, in my own opinion, the best story that you've written! I would love to see this become a multi-part series; seeing Colton and Ivy's love grow is heart warming (and the sex gave me a boner out of this world.) More stories like this, please!
very good
just love it from starte to finsh looking to more very soon yours leann5red
Wow
As usual you made an amazing story. Pleeeeeeease continue!!! I want more! :)
another great t girl tale keep em cumming
she should breed him after he breeds her my gf and me do that with each other all the time and its so sexy and hot
dang
very nice story
Love this story, but wish there was more build up with their romance and a bit less sex.
Good to see you back
I was waiting for your next story. This is it. You have talent with words. All your stories are just awesome. Please keep writing. :)
Finally!
I love all your stories! This one was as amazing as always! Hope to read another one soon.
Loved it. T-Girls and facesitting, a combination of my two favorite things in one story! I hope to read more like it!
good story
well-written, nice characters-great hot sex thanks
Part 2?
I'd really love to see a part 2 of this, where Colton bottoms for Ivy, and because more submissive, and he has to deal with his old friends some more.
great to have you back!
I always look forward to your stories, was afraid you'd quit on us. Welcome back!
Wow
I jerked off 3 times from this story, its so good! Hope there will be part 2 for my two favourite loves.
About time!
But definitely well worth the wait. Thank you!
Cool!
will there be a part two?
Just Wonderful
Got to be one of the best, got. Me hard and ii have ED. Just great.
Please continue.
This is one hell of a story. I hope you continue Coltons and Ivys intimate adventure. 10 out of 10.
great job
I love your stories, and was not dissapointed by this one! I really like your style of writing. It allows the reader to fill some of the exact details left out, and make a little bit of our own story. Thank you!
Yeah
This was a absolutely wonderful story! I really enjoyed it a lot. It's good to have you back at writing! ^^
excellet
Like all of your stories.
Beautiful story can we have a follow up please they make a really lovely couple.
Absolutely Beautiful!
This was one of the loveliest stories I ever read. Hopefully, someday soon I'll find a big buxom T-gal to sit on my face as often asshe wants. Awsome!
GigglingSkull
This is so awesome. you should write a sequel. Love it like all of your stories.
i got three words for you
MORE MORE MORE I love all your work girl iv been waiting for new work from you and was not disappointed keep em cumming big fan!
Holy Sh**T
Damn! this is some of the best stuff i have ever read! you have no clue how much id love to find a girl like this myself
we need a Part II
This story is worth a second chapter!
He should have bit her clit off when he had the chance.
And put an end to this nonsense.
Sequel
Please make a sequel and have ivy lick Colton's ass like he did her and put some hardcore assfucking
Awesome story
Look forward to reading more Tgirl fun stories.
part 2 please
This is the best ever
another please
So hot please write a part 2 :)
once again another fine t girl story u can really deliver good storylines with the more romance themed tales
What fun!
Great dialog, very believable. I was hard and thinking about that big girl's butthole and my cock inside of her. I give it a star-spangled 5!
Fantastic as usual
You're an amazing writer. I check weekly to see if you've written a new story. Please keep 'em coming!
love to play with ivy
please write more love to find her myself
Welcome back
Missed your stories so much told with a true feeling and lots of detail
Great story not so long before the next one please
Had me captured from first sentence to last
Thank you xxx
OoooWweee! Damn, you make me feel her huge cock in my mouth! I can taste those thick loads of cum spattering my throat and soaking my tongue as I lick up the juicy cream!
Sorry, didn't know that was only the title section! LOL
verrrrrrryyyyyy gggggggooooooooooooooooooooooddddddddddd
NICE!
My gawd. There has to be a part 2 to this. Love the hint of romance and Ivy's bubble butt. Wish I was Colton. ;)
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