All Comments on 'He Likes to Nibble on My Cupcakes'

You can tell people that you are writing a silly short story that is not realistic and they still expect Shakespeare. Well, I liked it.

Of course - but delightfully so! Thank you and congratulations on your first story. I hope to read many more. Four stars and welcome to Lit.

I am sorry but could not seriously get past the first bit. I am all about encouragement and keep plugging along but this story gets a 1 from me.

Some readers appear to have the sense of humour of warthogs with piles, and they probably criticised Monty Python for being unrealistic.

This is one of the best stories I've ever read on here. More voluptuous lingerie clad mommy please.