All Comments on 'Breathless'

Only a few can write a breathtakingly erotic story like this. The lack of exaggerated descriptions of body parts and body fluids is refreshing. Keep it up.

WOW! Wow freaking wow!

This is one hell of a good piece of work. Well told. Hotter than the hottest part of hell. I am so impressed. Five stars simply aren't enough.

Finding oneself satisfied by another woman, took me 33 years but the outcome was like the heavens opened and never closed.

Great story. Janice

I am enthralled with the way your write. I love your descriptive sexual narrative, I find the coupling believable and hot. I need to sample more of your mind!

That story was amazing! It was like you read my mind...I have dreamt of a night like that for longer than you know. The thought of watching my husband with another woman while she pleasures me is my ultimate dream! Thank you!!

How I wish I could have a threesome. At my age, I probably never will. God, you are good -- maybe the best on Literotica.

I'm glad I just found you! I'm going to read more of your work! You weave an amazing narrative, very believable, and you have given me a vivid imagination as to how this all went down! I want a threesome like that too! Thank you!

The writing is so smooth and detail is so rich that I didn't even feel like I was reading a story. The way you conveyed Jess's thoughts and feelings put me right there! Outstanding!

One of the hotest stories I've read in a long time, I love F/F stories and you made it so real and even hotter by adding the husband, The plus side is it wasn't just sex they made love because they did love eachother.

Thank you so much! I can't wait to share this with my husband tonight. Great start to the weekend.

...because that's the state in which it left me. You portrayed Jess' passage from reluctance to arousal and then unconditional and ecstatic surrender convincingly and with considerable heat. Bravo. I'm looking forward to sampling more of your storytelling gifts in the near future.

When it's done well, watching a character's transformation from hesitancy to wantonness is one of the hottest tropes in prurient prose. It's also one of the oldest tropes, so kudos for making it not only fresh but sizzling as well. Using voyeurism as a trigger worked superbly. It made the sequence that followed entirely believable. It doesn't hurt that you have superb storytelling instincts and an enviable command of language.

then released

Thank you

This story was so well written I hope you keep writing. I notice you have not published here for a while. Hope you begin again. In the meantime I am going to read all of them.

Superb!

Excellent, what a great story. thanks.

Very well done! The best stories pull us into them, transferring the passion and desire from the characters to us, making us want to be part of it, not just observing it, which you did well.

I’m looking forward to reading more of your work and seeing where you take me.

Beautiful! My new favorite author.

I've only read a few Group Sex stories as they really aren't my thing, but I really like yours. Nice job.

This author...my god....

I wish I could write like this, so smooth and seemingly effortless, so erotic, simply beautiful

Probably one of the hottest and best written stories on Literotica. Perfect pacing. Bravo!

Exquisite.

Outstanding.... I have read several of your stories and loved them all... I know there will be unbelievers but I had exactly the same experience.. We met my wife co worker at dinner and after dinner to our home for the same event you wrote about here.... truth... Keep up the good writings....

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Thank you!

Exceedingly hot 🔥 your ability to ser fhe scenes in your stories is amazing. Thankyou for sharing and keeping us all horny.