by rockandroller
Very powerful. Everything was in such good detail. Thanks for sharing.
Your storylines are always well thought out and constructed. Not to mention just plain old hot. Keep it up.
Joel
Well since that story was dedicated to me, I must say that I absolutely LOVED it... wayyy turned on right now!!!!! :)
What a hot story of lust. I am not sure I believe that girls want their dad to be their first, but it was still a hot read. I loved it!!
that was awesome. I would love to hear more of her using her stockings and feet on him. keep em cumming
Great story. Gentle way to break in a young woman. You cannot beet older men or woman with younger (18 to 20+)girls or boys.
I am loving your story so far and looking forward to reading more. Great job so far!
This is a very nice little story, interestingly developed, and somehow believable. It looks like daddy has a real player on his hands. Looking forward to Chapter 2. Thanx for the read.
Five stars simply because of how you wrote the story of the daughter and her date enjoying some head in the park. Terrific wording.
Looking forward to the next chapter
I hope you involve Mom. The whole, “I won’t tell Mom, and you’ll have two pussies,” is just creepy and wrong. It knocks the sexy out of the story. Why does the daughter hate her mother? Why does Dad hate his wife?
Well written. Would like to see Mom involved. Maybe that is coming. Also, wish she had the heels on and not holding them. Much more erotic if she was wearing them.
Delicious. Thank you! Nice to see a well written and correctly spelt story for a change. On to Chapter 2...
It’s nice for a change to be able to tell the author that they not only wrote a very erotic story but how nice it is to read something that was plausible but also the proper use of words and their spelling, as well as the proper tense of a word. An expanded vocabulary isn’t something to be ashamed and neither is the proper construction of a sentence, although you’d think it was these days. Someone wrote in response to another story by another author, “Who gives a crap about spelling or grammar in general?” Well a lot of us do because it really does impact what you are writing. When I read a story and it has a million glaring errors of all kinds, it really does make a huge difference in my enjoyment of reading. Anyway, great job!
So freakin’ hot! OMG! I have a daughter who is absolutely gorgeous with a body and brains to match. We had an affair for about two years and she would wear thigh high stockings with garters whenever she wore a skirt or a dress. Heels too but not comefuckme pumps. She did and still does wear clothing that is feminine and shows her assets without looking slutty. 5’4” and 120 lbs with long brown hair down to her shoulder blades. 36D 25 36 were and still are her measurements.
The girl in this story reminds me of her when she was in high school. The most incredible sex I’ve ever had and she seduced me. She made no bones about the fact that she thought I was very handsome and sexy and would say out loud with her mom standing right there, “Mom, if he wasn’t my dad and you guys weren’t married I would fuck that man into orbit.” Good story! Has many elements in my real life relationship with her. She is married now but that intense attraction is still right there for both of us.
" I guess a girl’s first time should be in the backseat of a car with a boy she thinks she’s in love with." Nice reference to one of my favorite movies.