All Comments on 'My Best Friend Gets Inside My Wife'

You really, really, really have to watch your tense. You're bouncing around between past and present like a yo yo.

Wife already is getting ready to have the other guys kids.

She has better orgasms with him

And is giving husband pity sex

No passion, no tension, just a quick fuck. And I bet he did not pay her for it either.

Needs major editing.

and you will make it...

Brain dead, stupid, mad, all these apply to this type of husband - he might as well

go and buy a cradle now.

And this what they call a marriage. Now she is pregnant with another mans child? Pathetic story , yet there are so. Many of these lately.

Another selfish circumstance where no doesn't really mean no. His marriage is over.

Did any of them have the smarts of a rock? Even for fiction, this seemed implausible. Even good friends wouldn't let this happen. A second marriage ends in divorce. Just a really silly and really bad story. No where near enough information to backstop what happened.

Stories such as this prove a fact that can no longer be hidden. The greatest thrill and emotional experience a man can ever have is sharing his wife with another man. All else in the sexual circus is adolescent fantasy. Wife sharing is the ultimate definition of manhood. The definition of masculine bravery. 5*****

your def of a friend kind of eludes me

Not a bad tale. Good scenario. Only criticism I have to offer is to "show," not "tell." Their was too much dialogue whose only reason for existence was to let the reader know what was happening.

Like to see more from you.

Author's response - Thanks for the constructive feedback for those of you that left some. Keep in mind this is just a fantasy and it plays with the concept of risk as a trigger for eroticism. Many of you have left comments like "this man is crazy" or "what an idiot, his wife will be pregnant" and that's kind of the point of fantasies: to be an outlet for what we'd never do in real life.

I realize now that there are very high editing standards for the site as well. I should have posted this to pandorassecrets instead as I just hammered it out in one sitting, more to satisfy me than to create a work of literature.

You're right about the tenses, I'm all over the place. Think I'll perhaps take it down, re-write it and upload it.

But to those who just say "it's shit" could you not take the time and explain? Thanks again to everyone who left me some feedback I can work from.

Very nice sexy action.Everyone had a great time.I do think this story would have been better if you left out the talk about condoms,and the birth control device.It would be better for the story if she was on the pill.Condoms always spoil these stories.

Man, that was hot!

There is virtually NO suspense in this tale! Early on we learn that Sweetie gave Her Bull a 'Sorry About Your Divorce' hummer last time he was by! Why is Bull coming by, anyway? Business? En route to an elk hunt? Just to see if Sweetie will bear his child?

Then we quickly find out Sweetie may be more excited about getting laid than Her Bull is about Pizzle-2-Pussy Penetration. In a tizzy about HOW to attract a horny young (hung) single dude! GMAFB!

Oh, the tension is in whether Hubby will shut down what his Good Buddy and Hornie Sweetie want to do? Sure! Good Buddy coulda brought the rest of his basketball team and Hubby would have gone out to get a case of Cold PBR.

3* Mostly Tab A into Slot B.

as hes going to pay for the abortion..no matter if it could be either of ours if she gets pregnant any time in 3 months after fucking him he pays for the abortion and pays for a lady to fuck me till she can again herself..

"Wife sharing is the ultimate definition of manhood."

To sickos like you maybe. Wife sharing is a fetish that only a small minority of men relish, at least the comments lean that way on most of these stories. I don't really know where you cuckies get your facts from. Most likely from your own mind. Ever notice, that the majority of these type of stories are scored very low. That's a good indication that the majority of readers disagree with your observation. Have a great day. Peace.

*1* and that is scoring too high already.

with a lil wee wee. 1*

You are more excited about his big dick than you are about your wife, no wonder she needed a good hard fuck.

Fucking trash. Stop polluting this category.

The husband likes to share his wife. She is a loving wife. i have been a voyeur since childhood and i wanted my current wife to have sex with other men. It happened only in my dreams.

Keep writing and posting in LW! This was superb! The steady build-up to her fucking the friend, and taking out her birth control ring, was all extremely well-done.

Did she get pregnant? If so, who's sperm did it.

If not, how did she get so lucky?

trash, trash, pollution, go away

"dude are you sure this is ok?" Give me a god damned break.

Damn, I shot all over the keyboard!

I nearly came, just from reading the title! This happened to me. My husband's friend got out of the Marines and stayed with us for a while. My husband told me he wanted me to make love with him. I had just gone off birth control, and we had no condoms. He told me he wanted his best friend to impregnate me. I had difficulty wrapping my head around that one. Needless to say, there was a big discussion about all this. He convinced me of his love for both of us and his love for any child we created. When the moment came and his friend was incredulous that my husband wanted him to enter me bareback, my husband told him "I want you to give my wife a baby. Put your bare cock inside her unprotected cunt." Needless to say, his friend entered me quickly and came, after he heard that. Nine months later, after being shared by both men, I had a boy which we named after our best friend. We were all thrilled. Though he eventually moved away, we still play together whenever he comes to town. My husband wants me to go off birth control again, so that the next time his friend comes to town, he will give me another baby. Our first child is so beautiful, I can't wait for him to knock me up again.

I did cum while reading this.

Just another sick cuck story. Yawn.

The wife is nothing better than a gutter slut, and the husband is lower than shark shit on the ocean floor.

What real man offers his wife up to another man? I'll tell you, NONE!

But if you think its hot to have a cheating wife and a dickhead friend, then you are a idiot.

NOT REAL> GOD annony, you're such an asshole.. I gave this a 5

First of all - I cannot believe how many prudish, straight laced commenters there are dissing this story. This an EROTIC literature site and this is fantasy. Fantasies don't get pregnant (unless the author wants them to) - and they only divorce if that is part of the story.

I agree the editing was not the best but I have read an awful lot of stories that were much worse (some almost unintelligible).

My only real criticism is the author concentrated on the central action without giving any real detail about how this visit came about and what was agreed in advance. Was it his wife who wanted it to happen (presumably) and what did she expect and what was his thoughts that he discussed with her. What was said to the friend and what was he led to expect. I know it was briefly mentioned that there was action between the wife and friend when he was going through the divorce but a little more about the context of that would have helped.

Overall, not bad but a little lazy in setting the story up and the abrupt ending. 3* from me to encourage you to try again with a better crafted story.

@reader_3634 We wait your supporter opinion at BTB stories! BTB is fantasy too!

Me and my wife have been married for 28yrs but she always loved to fuck other people men and women she is a very big slut but I love to watch her get the hell fucked out of her and she sucks a cock like you would not believe. She asked me if it would be OK with me one night if me and my best friend would both fuck her at the same time. I was wondering how I would like to see her getting fucked by another man anyhow so I said if you want to I'm all for it. We are not swingers my wife is just a horney fucking slut and she always does it with me and she loves to get her pussy ate as much as she loves to eat a nice pussy and ride on a new cock every now and then. I Love My Slut

Really enjoyed it. Classy. Sexy.

Tried to register.

Two couples are camping and on the third day Cindy decides to walk to the shower. Her husband and friends wife are relaxing and drinking, and the friend's husband Don says he'll go too.

As they are walking he points out the showers have no curtains and your clothes can get wet. He offers to go in with her and hold her clothes to keep them dry. She looks at him and smiles then says yeah right. He says I'll keep them dry and hand you the towel, then I'll shower and you can hold my clothes.

She doesn't say no, just laughs.

When they get to the showers, he follows her in. She turns and says You will undress first. Don has no trouble with that and quickly he is naked. Cindy stares at his cock and is impressed. It's large and starting to harden.

He says I am ready. She pulls her shirt off and hands it to him. She's wearing a black bra. She then slowly pulls down her pants, revealing black panties. They are cut high on the thigh and just cover her pussy.

Don's cock is now stiff and Cindy can't help but stare at it.

She's now standing in front of her friend in just panties and bra, and is quite excited.

She reaches behind to unclasp her bra and let it slide off her arms. Her 36DD breasts are now exposed to her friend Don. She hands him her bra and slips her panties down her long legs then gives them to him also.

They both stand naked looking at each other. Don sets the clothes on the chair without taking his eyes off Cindy. She steps closer and they embrace.

His cock rubs her belly and he rubs her bare butt then bends to take a nipple in his mouth. Her hand guides his cock between her thighs to her very warm and wet pussy.

He slides in easily and before long she is screaming in orgasm.

The shower will come after they do.

You did a wonderful job of capturing the excitement of another man cumming in your wife bareback. I loved it. It might be interesting in chapter 2 if you let someone get her pregnant. I've always wanted to hear my wife say she would like to have a black baby.

My best friend has cum inside my wife unprotected too.it was such a turn on for all 3 of us.he still fuck her it's been 2 years .we now use protection. I love sharing her with him.

Some friend? and a slut wife, and a cuckold in waiting. The husband if he value his friend friendship had any balls should have called a halt when she began slobbering over his friends cock, but like all cuckolds their brains lie in their cock ends.

that was a hot story I wouldn't mind my wife getting a big cock in her.

Years ago, I spoiled a good chance to share my wife with a very good friend of mine... Sucks to be me.

You're one sick fuck. ONE STAR for this garbage.

Well done! 5 stars!

I've watched mty wife get that many times and i love her having it. She doesn't ake precautions and she's had 6 babies so far. I love them all, even the 2 black ones.

the non-husband's cock is always bigger than the husband's. Somehow this is a fact of life. How this works in fiction seems obvious enough, but is it true in fact as well? Why does it work out like this?

I'm guessing that it has something to do with the type of relationship "average" men make with women, supportive, caring and loyal, which women go for when they want security; the guy with the big cock doesn't commit, he prefers to be single and act like the predator, which women want but only for the fun part not the permanent part...

Does this work over a large part of the population?

So many stories have this scenario where the other man has the bigger equipment, the hubby is average.

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My first boyfriend moved away in his sophomore year. I started dating and eventually married his good friend and neighbor. Several years after completing high school, he moved back into town. Although I was now married, my old boyfriend and I found we still had strong feelings for one another. We have been having sex with each other for months. My husband has had sloppy seconds quite a few times. In terms of sex, they are as different as night and day. And I am enjoying the best of two world's. My husband wants me to stop using the pill. I wholeheartedly agreed.

Excerpt from the story:

"When his marriage was ending, I let my wife fool around with him a bit. I didn't let them go far, just some oral and petting. Tonight I wasn't sure what would happen."

The story of my life:

It's possible to love a woman who sleeps with another man or other men.

I let my wife do whatever she wants (she has a Hall Pass).

I am 15 years her senior.

Her job requires frequent travel with overnight stay.

I even buy her expensive undergarments.

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☆☆☆☆☆- (5-)

👍👍! Erotic, romantic, poetic, & realistic 4-in-1.

❤ = ☆☆☆☆☆!

I have you a *2 for another cuck story.

Married 30 years, I was 43, she 37. Home owners & Harley tourers, many with a good friend of ours. Two beds in the motel room; we finally offered to share ours. All 3 of us are now in our seventies and the adventure continues. When it's good, and among consenting adults, it's VERY good. We both knew before marriage that neither of us were virgins, we have spoken openly about others we had been with, and both enjoyed the others adventures. If the marriage partnership is on good, solid, ground, we can't see the harm in having a visiting dick once in a while. True story!

1*- no further comment required

Sooo Hot.!. I want to watch So Badly

Hot and stimulating

Excerpt from the story (description of wife's sexy looks):

"... She looks immaculate. My wife has beautiful legs. They're toned and long and they lead up into a plush and shapely ass. She's got perfect rounded breasts and hair that falls down around her shoulders. The red schoolgirl skirt is much shorter than I remember. The blouse is undone low and I saw a flash of a lacy black bra underneath. I poke my head around the corner just as she's opening the door..."

i am dead serious i would have best my wife with a baseball bat then i would have set her whore ass on fire

its incredible the only thing i would have done differently was after he has cum in her i would have dove in & sucked her pussy clean of every drop of his load then i would add mine into the mix just sayin

LOVE it! My kind of wife sharing story.

4.7 = 94% (🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟), ❤❤👍👍!

wife sharing can be fun

I really LOVE this threesome story. It is erotic and romantic two-in-one.

I identified with the husband.

I am copy pasting another user's comment.

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Anonymous, over 4 years ago

LIKE IT. SHORT & SWEET & VERY VERY EROTIC. I GAVE IT A 5- (*****-)

Years ago, I spoiled a good chance to share my wife with a very good friend of mine... Sucks to be me.

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☆☆☆☆☆ (5)

❤❤

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What the wife and Dennis are doing is neither wife sharing nor a threesome; they are fucking behind her husband's back. That however is not the end of the world.

I'm copy pasting an earlier comment:

"Anon, over 2 years ago

👍👍!

Erotic, romantic, poetic, & realistic 4-in-1."

A longer story would of been the next time fulfilling his wife's words

💥💥💥💥💥 (five stars)

I am copy pasting another user's comment.

"Anonymous, over 4 years ago

LIKE IT. SHORT & SWEET & VERY VERY EROTIC. I GAVE IT A 5- (*****-)

Years ago, I spoiled a good chance to share my wife with a very good friend of mine... Sucks to be me."

Excellent: ★★★★★- (5-)!

Way to short a story

Its not really a story is it?

After watching my wife flirting with our friend on meny occasion, it got me thinking about them taking it further.

So over a few months I would always bring his name into our love making.

I would say things such as, I think you would like Pats cock sliding in and out of you.

Would you like sucking Pats cock, and drinking his cum.

One night as I was making love to her, saying Pat would really like to be doing this to you. She said do you really think he wants to fuck me.

I said would you like if he did fuck you.

She said I have been thinking about it for a while, would you want me to let him fuck me.

I look into her eyes, yes I would, I watched you flirting with him and it makes me horney every time.

We talked about it more and agreed that she should do it. For the first few times she wanted to do it without me being present.

Over the next few weeks she was talking to Pat planting ideas in his head, giving him a kiss on the lips when she would meet him.

He invited her to his place for a coffee. They kissed and feeling eachother.

A week later I was working out of town for two days, and she invited Pat over for dinner. She said they had dinner and she brought him to our bedroom and they made love. He stayed the night and he fucked her twice more, and again before he left the next morning.

When I got home she told me everything they did and I was so hard, we had great sex, and for the next few weeks.

More to come.

Excellent, ❤❤❤❤❤ (5.0)!

I am amazed at the explicit description.. My wife and I and her old boyfriend did exactly the same thing. Minus the school girl outfit. She met us at the door with nothing on but the radio.. Awesome night,, No she didn't get pregnant when we mixed up the cocktail,, We managed to have another six sessions over the next year..

I always sucked my wife clean before I added my seed. It always felt great entering her after her having sex with my friend.

Oh come on! The husband isn’t sure about intercourse and he should be uncertain. It’s a major decision. This should have been settled with her beforehand. If I were her husband and I was going to allow anything to happen, firstly I don’t want any pushback from her. You either accept the terms or go whore your slut ass on the street if you need another cock so fucking bad. You can start making some money. The second that bitch pulls the birth control ring out to fuck the guy, it’s over. He’s gone. Time to go! It was a nice visit and she is getting her whore ass divorced asap. It’s not even a story! It’s like a few sentences linked together. It’s just lame. Sorry but it’s not good at all.

Awesome depiction of that "special moment". I think you really tapped into the primal nut of the hotwife genre here.

MY BEST FRIEND GETS INSIDE MY WIFE is an excellent wife sex story:

4.75 = 95%, ♡♡♡♡♡ (5)!

I am copy pasting another user's comment because I can relate to it.

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Anonymous over 6 years ago

LIKE IT. SHORT & SWEET & VERY VERY EROTIC. I GAVE IT A 5- (*****-)

Years ago, I spoiled a good chance to share my wife with a very good friend of mine... Sucks to be me.

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👍👍!

I am copy pasting this comment because it is short yet it says a lot