A Likely Story

Great story.

I love the hallway scene. (Where are the devil horns when you need them?)

Daughter

would like to read a part 2

chapter 2

please hurry but don't rush and stuff it up, one of the best in a long time

Not Surprised

For some sneaky reason, I was not a bit surprised when the daughter came in. I hope there is a second chapter planned. Thank you for sharing

Fantastic read

Their is nothing more pleasurable than the touch, the energy, the experience of an older woman. A Superb story of which i can draw on in real life. Thank you for making me remember the good times

i loved it.

hope you plan to continue it. Cant wait to read what happens next.

?????

I'm a bit confused, I read it several times and could not find the part where he asked her out. Other than that its a good start and I hope there will be more.

AWESOME!!!

Great story line, well written and this story needs some chapters!! The daughter/ex-girlfriend needs to find out she blew it, Mom's still got serious "game" and Jimmy wins here. Excellent all the way around!
BRAVO!!

Too much fun

Finding the right partner and experiencing that kind of eye rolling, jaw clenching, heart stopping lovin' is wonderful. Brings back memories. Thanks for the tickling the memory out of me!

Needs part 2

Great story and well written. I would love to see part 2 with Lynn and his mom entering the discussion.

Good stuff up to a point

But I'm not a fan of the "no ending let the reader make one up" story. So I downgraded my score.

Nice Stroke Story

The arrival of the daughter I expected as soon as he went after the coffee.
There are a couple of discontinuities but they do not damage the story beyond comprehension.....

I enjoyed it ! It was light and I like the ending . Kaboom!
Thanks for the story 5******.


Tx cracker

Great Piece Of Writing*****

One of the best I have read this year, Thanks for sharing looking forward to more great stories,

boom

hope there is a part 2

Loved it

That ending is a real cracker.
And part 2 will be - when ?
73
HP

Excellent

I really liked it, thanks.

Great Story Line

I hope more chapters follow soon. Thank You!

bravo

wonderful--nice pace too

Brilliant

Loved the story, brought back memories of bygone years, but a brilliant start towards a most interesting second part.

CAN WE SEND TIMOTHY HOME....Its getting crowded...

Would it be likely that a second episode will follow....The potential must be explored... (Will welcome a response...(.kizambeezi@yahoo.com)

more please

this really needs a sequel. please and thank you.

Good story

I agree this needs a sequel. Where it stopped leaves the reader hanging.

Sequel please

These two are two wonderful, too loving, too erotic not to revisit. Thank you!

Sequel!

Excellent

Hadn't read a great one in a while.

Wonderful, erotic, passionate story. Totally loved it and your writing. If I hadn't loved the story to begin with, the dog having a joy-gasm coronary would have done it. Hysterical!

Definitely need more of this one...

Seeing these two not only deal with her daughter and his mother but finding out how much is lust and how much is two people falling in love... I'm clearly hoping for the love angle, even if it does take work and maybe one convincing the other it's ok...

Sequel please

I was already thinking this story was great but after reading that ending I'm just begging for more

Short wonders...

I love these short wonders you do. You set the scene, have the fun, and end it on a high note that makes us want more. For some reason it is still a satisfying ending so we aren't going crazy for more of the same story...not that we would mind if you kept going! :-) Thank you for writing these scenes.

Sincerely, Payenbrant

this is hot

I love this situation plenty of opentions keep on trucking ten bears43

Started off sooo slowly ( I like it like that ) !

This built up impeccably to a fairly predictable twist. Apparently this is not the first of a multiple installment series. Too bad, the farther the narrative went, the more I liked the characters. Story stands on its own merits though. Easy, peasy. *****

Second chapter...

A good stopping point of you have more coming, a few more paragraphs would have been nice if this was a planned ending point. I mean come on, you have to have the daughters reaction to MOM and old boyfriend getting it on...

more please

Please give us more. It can be just the two of them falljng in love but its a great storyline

Class

I love this, and I really respect writers who tell a good story with a well-developed plot. This is great stuff and worth more than the five stars we're allowed. But like some others, I would love to see the denouement when Lynn discovers her mother and her lover together.

You are the Nuts.

A totally British term, an endearing appraisal.
Your talent of mixing your writing skills coupled with
A vivid imagination. Bring joy, excitement, thoughtfulness
and intrigue. You are a giant on this wonderful site.
Thanks you,
Peter

if no second chapter in next 2 months

will return and rate this like a JPBob unfinished tale= 2 stars
even though if it is finished in a subsequent submission,,,it is a 5+ star work of art.
please don't make me rate it 2 stars.

wonderful

well written with a nice surprise sending. Sometimes the best part of a story is that which is not told :)

Few Small Issues

Just a few things...

1] Bugged by the looking "as so much" of her thigh..., since no mistakes I could see before that.

2] Unless I missed eating the sandwiches, you never got to the "desert".

Get oujt of that!

Oh the following paragraphs would be a joy to read.
How Mary explains it to her daughter would be a real eye-opener.
Thank you for an entertaining story.
HP

Too obvious

Can you say threesome? UGH!

Fun story, though I'm not a fan of leaving things unfinished aka. open-ended.

Drat... came a point I knew I'd read this before... and was disappointed...

that there STILL isn't a second chapter to it...

I still maintain that this story BEGS to be continued at least through ONE more chapter... It's just too enjoyable to have it stop there...

Fantastic

really does need a second (or more) chapters. lotsa fun to be had yet especially with his mom and her daughter in the picture.
Please write some more