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Surviving the Horde Ch. 02

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by Anonymous02/20/14

Not a bad story

Kinda a weird change between Maya trying to kill Mr. Soto and going goggle-eyed over Jack. How did David die again? Still, overal good story, please write more. Maybe with longer chapters? :)

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by Anonymous06/07/14

yeah how did he die?

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