Outstanding as usual.I told you all the times before,that you are one hell of a writer with an excellent flair for writing erotica.Please do write more frequently.Please also make this protagonist dress up more in showing-off Indian dresses,like in a college friend's engagement ceremony,etc.and make her a real slut that she is.Keep writing and bring us more of your wonderful work.
I loved the buildup and the realistic portrayal of characters. In any competitive setting, the participants use whatever skills they can leverage. I have myself witnessed this in b-school.
Would like to read more from your pen.
Cheers
Dronez
PS - I have written something in College set-up, based on part reality and part fiction. Would love to get your feedback on it.
Neha: You have written it so well that tells me that u r passionate n oozing naughty seductress who not only knows how to dress but have teasing mind with wild passion n makes it wild with words.
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Outstanding
Outstanding as usual.I told you all the times before,that you are one hell of a writer with an excellent flair for writing erotica.Please do write more frequently.Please also make this protagonist dress up more in showing-off Indian dresses,like in a college friend's engagement ceremony,etc.and make her a real slut that she is.Keep writing and bring us more of your wonderful work.
Very Nice
Hot description and dialogue would add more spice.
Keep writing dear.
Realistic yet titillating
I loved the buildup and the realistic portrayal of characters. In any competitive setting, the participants use whatever skills they can leverage. I have myself witnessed this in b-school.
Would like to read more from your pen.
Cheers
Dronez
PS - I have written something in College set-up, based on part reality and part fiction. Would love to get your feedback on it.
excellent
very hot, flow and discription is superb
Excellent Passions
Neha: You have written it so well that tells me that u r passionate n oozing naughty seductress who not only knows how to dress but have teasing mind with wild passion n makes it wild with words.
Great keep it up...Amazing young women u must be.
Sanjay
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