That was a great story...I could picture everything perfectly and it was very erotic! I loved the first part when he realized she had been watching him masturbate on the picnic table...that was very erotic and sensuous! I got very excited as I read it...thank you! ;)
excellent work and great writing. Very visual and realistic detail toeverything, not just the sexual stuff.
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What An Erotic Story!
That was a great story...I could picture everything perfectly and it was very erotic! I loved the first part when he realized she had been watching him masturbate on the picnic table...that was very erotic and sensuous!
I got very excited as I read it...thank you! ;)
well done
excellent work and great writing. Very visual and realistic detail toeverything, not just the sexual stuff.
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