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nice start

Great beginning. Really want to hear how things went when Karla got home and what happened next.

Fun story

Sometimes sibling rivalry can work to advantage. It is also a situation than can go badly very fast.

You wanted her first time to be special, just the two of you. But then you included a third person photographing it? Huh?

Dude, that was so wrong. SO wrong. pft you make me SICK. Liked it, but with your eighteen year old sister-in-law when your, like, double her age???? WRONG

What a Prick!

Hope wife didn't get fucked and she takes him for everything he has putting him and her slut sister out in the street, has enough pull with the boss to make him lose his job.

great beginning then.....

You had a great beginning but then it went downhill from there. You've got one hell of a imagination, though. I'm not saying this story was trash but it did leave something to be desired. On the other hand, I'm not the one writing it......

I agree

The male narrator is a supreme asshole, I'd give you 5 stars on that scale but there's nothing to like about a guy who has been waiting six years to fuck his bride's sister and then gets a friend to record it.

Hey you "critics"

Don't be so hard on the writer.
It's a pretty damn good story about a nasty character.
But it's only a story so judge it as such.
As pornographic fiction I give it a five.

A part 2 to this would be amazing 😍😍 Great job!

A part two to this would be AMAZING! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE make a part two! I'm BEGGING YOU!!

Make her pregnant

I think u should have another part where he Fucks her in his bed with the objective of making her pregnant, even before the divorce. Otherwise it was a hot story. Very sexy

Threesome?

Maybe have his wife walk in on them fucking, giving her the ultimatum for a divorce or accepting what is happening and joining them?

Chapter 2???

I'd really have loved to read a 2nd chapter to see what happen's next...