Never ever stop writing. Your stories are fantastically written, and even when there isn't anything sexual going on, I am so enthralled by the writing style and depth of character and everything that I cannot stop reading. I can't wait for the continuation of this marvelous and sexy tale!
Well was expecting a drop in writing of this story the content to slip to a lower level
Instead it just got better so much detail and back story
This is a real and true story not all wham bam fucking but a full blooded story
So well done cliptoe please keep it going as the story Mia told about herself brought tears to my eyes the poor girl
Great story well done
love
krissie
As an experienced bi-TG lover myself, I must say that you have developed the story magnificently and realistically. I appreciate your bringing Mia's back story into the mix as several of the TG ladies
I have been with have similar experiences...and your making David vulnerable and accepting, while keeping him as the "strong" person in the relationship is welcome. Keep on writing at this level of quality and you will be appreciated even more.
Your presentation of a romantic story between a straight man and his ts girlfriend/lover is so close to reality that "hurts". And for people with the usual smug comments, David IS straight even when he lets his gf inside him or snowballs with her. Everything is in the eye of the beholder so ...
Dear cliptoe if you find a way read the short story Rosinante by Chet Williamson...
English
please for the love of all that is good
Never ever stop writing. Your stories are fantastically written, and even when there isn't anything sexual going on, I am so enthralled by the writing style and depth of character and everything that I cannot stop reading. I can't wait for the continuation of this marvelous and sexy tale!
Thank You Anon!
Wow! Thank you Anon! I am humbled and inspired by your beautiful comment. I will have to get back to bringing you more of Mia and David.
A new level
Well was expecting a drop in writing of this story the content to slip to a lower level
Instead it just got better so much detail and back story
This is a real and true story not all wham bam fucking but a full blooded story
So well done cliptoe please keep it going as the story Mia told about herself brought tears to my eyes the poor girl
Great story well done
love
krissie
Thank you Krissie
Thank you so much for your beautiful comment. It is the best compliment of all to hear my story touched you so.
Thanks again!
Stunning
Loved it xxxxxx
Agree with Rebecca and Kriss...Thank You
As an experienced bi-TG lover myself, I must say that you have developed the story magnificently and realistically. I appreciate your bringing Mia's back story into the mix as several of the TG ladies
I have been with have similar experiences...and your making David vulnerable and accepting, while keeping him as the "strong" person in the relationship is welcome. Keep on writing at this level of quality and you will be appreciated even more.
Knowing
Your presentation of a romantic story between a straight man and his ts girlfriend/lover is so close to reality that "hurts". And for people with the usual smug comments, David IS straight even when he lets his gf inside him or snowballs with her. Everything is in the eye of the beholder so ...
Dear cliptoe if you find a way read the short story Rosinante by Chet Williamson...
This series is really taking flight.
Fantastic. Has all the elements of a great errotic love story.
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