All Comments on 'Mia Mine Ch. 03'

Never ever stop writing. Your stories are fantastically written, and even when there isn't anything sexual going on, I am so enthralled by the writing style and depth of character and everything that I cannot stop reading. I can't wait for the continuation of this marvelous and sexy tale!

Wow! Thank you Anon! I am humbled and inspired by your beautiful comment. I will have to get back to bringing you more of Mia and David.

Well was expecting a drop in writing of this story the content to slip to a lower level

Instead it just got better so much detail and back story

This is a real and true story not all wham bam fucking but a full blooded story

So well done cliptoe please keep it going as the story Mia told about herself brought tears to my eyes the poor girl

Great story well done

love

krissie

Thank you so much for your beautiful comment. It is the best compliment of all to hear my story touched you so.

Thanks again!

Loved it xxxxxx

As an experienced bi-TG lover myself, I must say that you have developed the story magnificently and realistically. I appreciate your bringing Mia's back story into the mix as several of the TG ladies

I have been with have similar experiences...and your making David vulnerable and accepting, while keeping him as the "strong" person in the relationship is welcome. Keep on writing at this level of quality and you will be appreciated even more.

Your presentation of a romantic story between a straight man and his ts girlfriend/lover is so close to reality that "hurts". And for people with the usual smug comments, David IS straight even when he lets his gf inside him or snowballs with her. Everything is in the eye of the beholder so ...

Dear cliptoe if you find a way read the short story Rosinante by Chet Williamson...

Fantastic. Has all the elements of a great errotic love story.

Your writing is so good I am David and enjoying my journey, love you to bits.so glad I found you