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Unanticipated Ch. 02

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous04/30/14

Next Phase

You are heading in the right direction. Now you need to bring in the Pregnancy thing, either through reluctance or She wants her brother to seed her. Really dwell over the feelings she has held back over the years, and now that they have consummated their love for one another, she wants to totally become his lover, she wants to be totally taken, she wants him to prove his love by doing the one thing that will show the world and her brother that she is 110% all in. Really do some great dialogue between them, her begging for the chance to show him how much he means to her, how she wants and needs to feel a new life fill her, a new life from her own brother's loins. Continue with the Birth, and then really get into the lactation thing, how she feels like she is giving him her precious fluid, he, of course is completely enamored with her milk, leading to some very wet lovemaking sessions. later, she surprises him with her request that she wants very much to be pregnant again, dwell on that awhile.

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by Dream5905/07/14

As with your new story

This shows a lot of promise. It needs to carry on to a more settled out come. You show as much promise as your stories and I look forward to more of your efforts.

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by Anonymous05/09/14

"Her folds accommodated me perfectly, as though her pussy was crafted specifically for this purpose; to sheathe her brother's cock."

That's the way lots of young guys feel the first time they fuck their sister. And it's understandable. Brothers and sister are the genetically closest connected human beings. It makes sense that the boy's cock fits his sister's cunt like a hand in a glove. This is the third excellent story by his highly talented writer on the intriguing and exciting subject of sisterfucking. The amazing thing is that TSB is 18 to 22 years old, so maybe even still a late teenager. I'm glad that Jake wound up fucking the shit out of Ania, that's the way TSB's tales tend to end up. Jake gave his sister a really hot incestuous fuck, she came like crazy, and the boy blew his hot brotherly balls right up his sister's tight little twat. Jake's given Aina lots of little presents in the past, but the huge twatful of creamy semen he shot into her now is the best, most appreciated gift a brother can ever give his cute baby sister and that a sister can ever receive from her hunky big brother.

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