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An Afterglow Sonnet

byWillOtheWisp©
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by Anonymous

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by butters02/20/14

recommended read over on the Poetry Forum for this unusual piece

really enjoyed some of your phrasing here.

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by tazz31702/20/14

I READ THIS SONNET

and was unable to realize. tk u mlj lv nv

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by greenmountaineer02/20/14

This smart, imaginative, thought provoking. "...and an inner mom invites/ herself...." great lines.

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by HarryHill02/20/14

Amusing and cheeky

a near sonnet nice form well done this line
(...The candy grin floats off into a room)
does not work well sonically
or trip from my clumsy lips
fix it willya?

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