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The Weekend on the Farm

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by Anonymous

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by Harper202/21/14

A good read

This story has the ring of truth about it. A quality that holds your reader through to the end.... A good read, well done

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by Anonymous02/22/14

So so story with bad grammar makes it difficult to read

Some of the tgenses are wrong and I didn't like the way you related the story. Was it third person or what?
Keep trying and eventually you will get it right(er)

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