Liked it, but confused.
It was good start now keep going. Good luck? I'll keep up with ya.
Not bad, but watch your her/his placements. They kept getting changed and Taylor was a her and a his several times, as example :)
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Interesting
Liked it, but confused.
OK
It was good start now keep going.
Good luck? I'll keep up with ya.
Interesting
Not bad, but watch your her/his placements. They kept getting changed and Taylor was a her and a his several times, as example :)
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