All Comments on 'Alex & Maggie: The Bet Ch. 02'

You need to write more chapters.

More chapters and please make them longer than 1 page

If you could eventually get the parents involved so the kids can fuck in the open at their homes all the time due to the parents also being involved in committing incest as well.

Wish your would make more

Both "chapters" we're too short...the writing is okay, but you shouldn't rush to submit something that's under a page long. Maybe wait until you have at least two pages before your next submission.

nice work so far but try develope the story more dont just focus on the sex.

nice work so far but try develope the story more dont just focus on the sex.