Motel Bar Romance

Better than very well written. Concise and descriptive. Erotic, "erotic" meaning hot.

" The bar's mirror, rarely a girl's friend, hinted at the answer." That is a great line; a great lead-in for the description.

I'm totally impressed.

So hot it's smoking.

She needs more. 4*

didnt get it

Where is hubby? What was the meaning of his message that she can take more cock than she is getting? Maybe I am dense but just didnt get it

Thought of old song ' Magic Man' by Heart reading this

The spellbound bit of narrative was written well. I appreciate that. The cock size worship was cliched, unless one has been in the presence of such inordinate endowment.

I saw a HBO special on men who are gifted in this regard. Whatever they were packing below the belt didn't seem to apply above the neck. Perhaps it was a small sample size, but I hope not.

Wham Bam

Wham Bam ... and change the poor lady's life forever!

Kinda like eating Perfect Ribs in a place you're not likely to ever be near again! And you start wondering how many things and folks you'd miss if you moved there!

whimpering

Oh my goodness! i loved it! What a surprisingly wet fantasy! Please please tell me they meet again!
huggggggggggs and thank You
suzanne

Nicey Turned Story

I liked the way you conveyed so much without saying it. Love the way he read her, knew her, and gave her what she needed/wanted! This is an interesting method of writing that draws my mind deeper into the story as I interpret what is said and done and not have it all fed to me on a spoon. Its hard to find that kind of innovative approach, actually its hard to find writers and or stories worth the time to read. I find now that I have read two of your tales, that you need to be noted on my favorite list so I can keep an eye on your postings. Thank you for going deep and giving us stories worth our time.

What a wonder experience!

So true to life!
So, that being said, when do you want to meet Grandpa for a similar night?
Just sex no names!