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Bewildered Cheating Wife

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous06/01/14

Nothing missing

The story is complete.

Can't anyone use their fucking imagination anymore?

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by Anonymous06/27/14

Beautiful!

When you have a whore on your hands, you treat her like a whore. And to do that, you charge for her services.

And go find yourself another wife...

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by Tootight106/28/14

good story

I really don't know how a man can think with such clarity in that situation, I don't think I could.

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by betrayedbylove08/09/14

You Know

I've been saying that cheaters are the most stupid people on the planet. This tale proves it.

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by Anonymous11/07/14

cheating wives...

This collection should be labeled cheating wives. A loving wife would be ccompletely loyal and honest with her husband. Stll, I liked your story.

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by Anonymous01/01/15

its public knowledge divorce the slut

plenty of witnesses and pics sent t sorryo his own email. sorry only revenge I see here is on the guy, none on the wife.

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by tazz31701/16/15

ITS MOTHER GOOSE TIME

and the goose and gander and the piper being paid. TK U MLJ LV NV

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by Anonymous02/12/15

Sequel, Please

I really would like to see if Jim can, or wants to, save his marriage, and see what additional punishment he and Martha give Tori.

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by 49greg02/20/15

Wow!

Hi, I am the author of this story and thought it was time I commented. It has been about a year since this was posted and I never imagined it would draw so much attention. and while it is not the most viewed of any of my stories it is close. It certainly is by far the most voted on of my stories, and the most commented on of any of my other submissions. I'm really flattered.

My other LW submissions weren't nearly as well viewed, voted or commented on, and scored lower. Not that anyone can count on a decent score, or even objective scoring, on any cheating wife story.

Thank all of you for viewing it, and especially for those of you who voted and commented on it. For a time I even listed some of the most negative comments on this and other stories as part of my signature line in the Author's forum. They were badges of honor - I got some people really riled up and caused reactions with nothing but my words. Thank you all.

As for a continuation, I never planned to continue it. It was just a slice of time in the lives of a few people. There was never any character development, and not much of a plot, certainly no real sex scene. A continuation would be really difficult because of the lack of character development and background. Hmmm, I just thought that a prequel might be easier to get there. Or perhaps a flashback from the results of the night, one of the couple thinking back to what led up to this, then following on with the result. Oh well, I've got dozens of story ideas in my laptop, and I've been pretty much stuck and haven't written more than a few hundred words on any of them since last October. Hopefully I'll get my mojo back eventually. But real life is intruding right now and I feel guilty for taking the time to write this.

The subject of cheating wives interests me, not least because I had a wife who cheated and eventually (phew) left me in a no-fault divorce. I remember an overall feeling of relief when she finally told me she was leaving. I would have paid far more than the very reasonable settlement she asked for. I considered it a learning experience. Not that I wasn't bitter, but shit happens and life goes on.

I would love to do more cheating wife stories, but he big problem is that LW/cheating wife stories get very low voting scores so there isn't a lot of incentive for me to do one. I can and do laugh off the crazies that comment, and authors here have been known to share them on the forum, much to the amusement of others, but the voting is a problem. So there probably won't be many, if any, more from me.

Anyway thank you all for viewing and voting in my most voted and commented on story here.

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by Anonymous02/20/15

Great plot idea, and dramatic buildup, but . . .

Why the hell did she do it? She sounded remorseful as soon as she spoke to her husband. Maybe FTDS has a role to play here? Hope you would give permission since you seem to lack interest in continuing. That would be a nice gesture to the many readers have have taken an interest in this work.

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by Anonymous03/24/15

take her home, no way in hell, let her go with mike and be his whore for all time

divorce the slut never let her back, fuck mikes wife and send her home cum dripping

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by aptonthe50309/05/15

Interesting Response

I thought you wrote a good short story here, with interesting characters. I liked Jim’s response to his cheating wife, making her out to be a call girl and charging for her services.
I was a little bewildered by Tori’s response. But the story really doesn’t provide a lot of background on the characters, such as did Tori know Mike, have they hooked up before, what was her mood before they headed out. But overall the plot was strong and the characters were fun. Thanks for the enjoyable read and please keep writing!

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by Goodhue10/18/15

What Goes Around,Cums Around!

Good to see Jim doesn't wimp/cuck out! Liked the "turn around is fair play ending" too! Nice final touch having Martha add that Tori can go down on her to clean her up.
To extend the story,when Jim gets Tori home,he ties her to a chair facing their bed. He and Martha then REALLY get it on starting with a blowjob right in Tori's face ending with Martha gulping down Jim's load noisily. Jim then proceeds to give Martha a sloopy cunt-licking which ends up in a mutually orgasmic 69. Finally,Jim gets Martha soaking wet,altermates between fucking her twat and ass,then blows his load all over her snatch. Tori is then dragged over and forced to lick Martha clean and then orgasm. (When Martha arrives home,she kicks Mike in the nuts so hard,he eventually loses his left ball.)
Jim uses the photos that Mike took of Tori sucking and fucking each other that he e- mailed to himself to get a quick and favorable divorce settlement. As a final kick in the ass,he posted the pics on a popular amateur porn site and e-mailed the link to all of Tori's co-workers,friends,family,etc.

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by Anonymous10/18/15

gross

Not a cuck but still no class and less taste.

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by icebread12/27/15

Rubbish

fucking rubbish

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by Anonymous12/27/15

Wow, another crappy story!

I just can't seem to find a decent story tonight. This was pathetic.

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by Anonymous01/29/16

Once out of sight......

Mike started laughing. He had sent the pictures to his home computer the minute he took them. It took him less than 2 minutes to put a "stop payment" on the check. Mike beat them home and was waiting with his Glock. When they walked thru the door he explained that Jim and Martha were leaving and that if he ever heard from then the pictures would be sent to every person they knew, starting with their families. End to a really poorly thought out story. No stars as even giving this drivel one star would be an insult to the star.

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by Sigint06/04/16

As an Experiment? 2 Thumbs Up

Stop sitting on this and develop it! Great potential. Martha's corroboration? Sells it. I like the way the protagonist manhandles the a-hole without clocking him. Your description of the two of them, bigger but softer, smaller but developed, makes him all the more intimidating. No special forces/black belts out of your butt hole required.
This was foreplay. Remember what James Bond said?

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by Anonymous09/03/16

Tori would noway be aloud around her husband or house. Divorce her ass and beat the shit out of Mike.

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by Anonymous10/20/16

I Didn't Like It Much

I mean, he caught his wife cheating and the best he can come up with is charging the guy for his time with the wife? Sorry but that's just not enough payback to suit me. 1 Star.

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by Anonymous12/07/16

anon-out of sight

Martha is Mike's wife. He will be waiting long time with glock maybe the weekend
By that time Jim will have impregnated Martha and have a gb of photos of her and jim and tori
My guess is martha will come home with check of her own!!!!

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