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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous02/23/14

Perfect

PERRFFEECCTTTTT

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by Anonymous02/24/14

so sexy

I wanna try this!

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by BurningMonkey02/24/14

Ended too soon, and too abruptly. :(

You need to put some "finish" on this piece, like a good wine. Don't just end after the cumshot, add a taper-off at the end. It doesn't have to be long, a sentence or two just to round it out. It's like watching Star Wars and having the movie end abruptly right after the Death Star blows up.

Otherwise a good read. Keep writing!

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