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Maggie is "Taken" By The Law

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous02/24/14

I want to meet Maggie

Maggie sounds so hot and I loved the scene in the bathroom. Sounds like both parties actually wanted the sex but it still felt a bit like rape or at least forced sex. Can't wait to find out what happens when the Lieutenant gets together with Maggie and Jack the next time. Keep up the good work. Love the Maggie stories whether they are truth or fiction.

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by Anonymous02/24/14

Worthless couple

Sounds more like someone gave her a date rape drug; with the way she's acting.

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by Anonymous02/24/14

Great work

You're all right Jack. Keep up the good work. This is a Loving Wife story the way it is meant to be. Nothing is hotter than a hot wife, and no man can be luckier than married to one. This hubby enjoys her flings as much as she does but is ever ready to protect her if things get out of hand. Only a real man can do that. More stories like this are being posted and those old burn the bitch queens are giving up the fight and retreating.

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by Anonymous02/24/14

a cop

can be killed just as easy as anyone else .and it seems this one may be even easier. hes not only stupid hes egotistical. which makes him doubly stupid. Id say put a razor blade in her pussy so that when he slides into what he thinks is a pussy waiting to be fucked what happens is he cuts it off and bleeds to death. Now that would be a fitting end to a stupid asshole Id also look at him as he lay dying and said yes Lt you did fuck her again But in the process you also got fucked didn't you. Gee youre bleeding all over my carpet ill call the ambulance when youre dead. And explain it this way he had told your wife he was going to and there was nothing she could do about it Otherwise hed kill me .Well she figured out that maybe that razor blade in her diaphragm may do the trick. nevere figured hedd slam in so hard that hed split it from tip to base .Ive never seen so much blood from a split cock. Id never tell them I kinda helped by slamming her heels in his ass and pulling him into her pussy or would it be hubby hand pushing his stupid ass down on it either way hes dead from blood loss and hes being buried with a split dick ..playing around or not what he did was rape and cop or no cop he deserved to if not die at least spend his life peeing two ways at the same time

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by thebuffalo02/24/14

Writing was good. The plot was a bit unique - at least for me it was.

Seems to me the LT's actions crossed the line. In that scenario the boy would have had to go down hard.

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by stanford_carly02/24/14

I liked it

Will you make a sequel to this? The guy did say he will fuck her again so a sequel seems appropriate.

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by rightbank02/28/14

You should be mad at me

even the cheating wife understood.

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by Anonymous02/28/14

If this story is even remotely autobiographical...

then you should seek therapy regarding your inability to "own" rightful anger. The husband in this story would have every right to be furious with his wife, and the man that fucked her. Regarding the statement:

"My hot wife, Maggie, is normally a very demure, Southern lady. However she does have an inner slut which she only allows to emerge on rare occasions."

It seems from your stories that a better description would be that she is invariably a wanton slut with the morals of an alleycat.

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by Anonymous03/01/14

What a idiot sticking his cock into his slutty wife's skanky cunt filled with his LT's sperm. He must be a faggot

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by devilspy03/06/14

Good start cuckold

Bet you slide right in after he stretched her out. All warm and wet from his huge man sized load. She should have made you lick and suck her some before you fucked her for seconds. Good tale so far.

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by Anonymous06/20/14

Hot fucking story

WOW............what a hot scene in the bathroom. She really didn't ask to be fucked but it sounds like she got a good fucking and wants more. Kind of like rape but not really. Very hot scene. Get the sequel written. Can't wait to see where this goes.

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by Anonymous06/12/15

hot wife = WACC

Only difference between husband of a hot wife and a WACC is reality.
WACC knows he is nothing and is not respected. Hot wife's husband is still dilutional.

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by Dishie07/08/15

There you are....

Anonymous strikes again. Who's delusional here. You seem to walk the fine line of reality and fantasy. It cracks me up to read you idiotic comments.

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