All Comments on 'Erica's Tiny Bikini Bet'

It's crap like this that spoils the content of Literotica, there is nothing of value within the content of this missive.

I can't wait for summer!

While I found this story to be quite good, the constant mistakes with the names being muddled up really put me off quite badly. There was even a case of there being two Erica's, one lying on top of the other!!!

"It's crap like this that spoils the content of Literotica, there is nothing of value within the content of this missive."

It's crap like (the rambling of "anonymous") that spoils the content of Literotica for everyone. There is nothing of value within the content of their trolling.

Yes, I'm acutely aware of the irony of my anonymous posting, too.

See Anonymous? I can troll with the best of them just like you!

that was a good story. I know you said it was going to be a stand alone story, but a few follow ups would be much appreciated.

Not a single original, clever, interesting or entertaining part here. Cardboard characters spouting dialogue seemingly written by a ten year old or a rock. Even for fictional characters they acted without rhyme or reason. Just plain awful. A "1".

First stupid useless nothing: not at all Literate----nor at all Erotic!!

Just a waste of time for all who read or wrote??5F27

I was very surprised by the last comment. Excellent story, very well written, funny and engaging. One of the few to do dialogue well. One of my favorites, hope you write more. Thanks!

I love this story

ok this blew me away. gods I wanted to be Erica

I really enjoyed this story. I am an ENF fan and this had it all. If you would, please read The Murder of Elizabeth Rae. I think that you will like it.

Loved the story, especially the end. Just wish a small crowd would've seen her last moments...

I so longed to be Erica! I loved this and could easily picture every single detail. Wonderful story.

Ok sorry could not read last part, she should have just walked to that first guy ask for help and said May was doing this against her will and it would have back fired on May. Or she could have told May she would scream for help when the ladies came in changing room. Made May switch suites!

That was insanely hot - a fantasy realized for me.

I was waiting for a blindfold, or gag. :)