All Comments on 'Wings of a Lover Ch. 04'

Kelly isn't an idiot by herself. Brooklyn is in that boat with her. I don't know why they believe their kidnappers would just let them go after observing them have sex. If the gargoyles could easily mind control humans to have sex wouldn't they be performing said acts all the time? If we go by the Illuminati's reasoning wouldn't there be dead and missing females everywhere?

Hopefully Brooklyn's leader will find them.

I enjoyed it.

Good job, can't wait to see what happens next.

I am addicted to this story!!! Please hurry!

Lovin the story so far. Please continue when you can. Thanks :)

Just another no ending story,,seems rampant on here,and a waste of readers time,,and your writing,,

Please update its pitty you dont finish your story

Love this storyline. Great fanfic! Please add more, can't wait to see what happens

I know it's been a few years since you've worked on this story. I hope you come back to it to finish it.

I thoroughly enjoyed this story and I hope you finish

I loved this story. Please finish it.

Did you get the names of your characters from the cartoon series Gargoyles? My kids used to watch it. All of the names were exact. Its a good story, but your characters are not original, they are copied from the tv series than ran 1994 to 1997 by Disney television. Just letting you know