by North200
I liked it a lot, but somehow I get the gut feel this is going to get dark
please don't make it go dark on us. It is a very good start. Maybe you give us his point of view also.
Very nice opener. I expect horrible things. Wonderful deliciously horrible things.
And I have an affinity for things grouped in twelves, so that helps. ;)
Decided wait until I had read the whole 12 Gates.... I loved it !!!!!!!! Please keep writing. I look forward to reading more of your work