All Comments on 'Twelve Gates Ch. 01'

Interesting scene. It begs for continuation

I liked it a lot, but somehow I get the gut feel this is going to get dark

please don't make it go dark on us. It is a very good start. Maybe you give us his point of view also.

I'm very anxious to see where this leads!!

Certainly drew me in.. can't wait for more.

Very nice opener. I expect horrible things. Wonderful deliciously horrible things.

And I have an affinity for things grouped in twelves, so that helps. ;)

Decided wait until I had read the whole 12 Gates.... I loved it !!!!!!!! Please keep writing. I look forward to reading more of your work