I Was Only Teasing

I like this a lot - the best of your recent four poems

This is a beautifully told story. You write very well.

I read this story through your 'Eowyn's Story'. Generally I only read the Non Erotic poems as graphic descriptions of sex tend to be unerotic in prose and dire in verse. This is highly erotic and grounded in the real.

Eowyn's story is similarly very well written but as none of us has been in a sword/axe battle, it is artificial. The same applies to your other two poems. They are all excellent in form, ideas and writing but for me lack bite.

This one has bite. In spades. Congratulations and please keep submitting your poems - or stories.

Cleardaynow, thank you for taking the time to read all four and commenting. This one was definately my most serious attempt at erotic to date. I'm just getting back into writing after a 5 year hiatus, so hopefully there is plenty more to come.