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Clarisse, Nude Dancer

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous02/26/14

stupid

a silly question from a brain dead writer-raising a bastard.

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by looking4it02/26/14

"I'm now raising him in Texas, but I was never sure he was really mine!"

Find by me. Takes you out of the gene pool. By chance have any siblings or cousins decided to do ghe same thing, for the betterment of society of course.

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by EgoTrixi02/26/14

To be honest...

I think this story is not really worth mentioning...

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by honey_licker112402/26/14

A fairly good story...

but style needs working on. For example: I said, She said, Clarisse said doesn't need to come at the beginning of the quoted dialogue. Put some at the end.

I would have like to have seen more lead up. The story starts out, boom!, wife is dancing and stripping on stage. What brought her there? If it was money troubles, it was only mentioned once. This is "Loving Wives", but not so much loving from the wife. Unless I had seen it in the lead-in, one wouldn't have known that she was a wife and a mother. That makes it more erotic for me. Single mothers have to be strippers to help raise their kids. They do what they got to do, and that is commendable. Husband, and father seems like he is okay with everyone with a hard dick fucking his wife. Shouldn't he have more misgivings? "I'm now raising him in Texas, but I was never sure he was really mine!" Well that was bound to happen the way she was screwing everybody.

Enjoy these kind of stories where a hubby shows off his wife. I gave it 3 stars.

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by MrsCanyon02/27/14

Great story and great fucking!

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by joln32103/06/14

So why the divorce? She didn't cut him off. as he said, the sex got better with her working. plus, paying the bills, and raising a kid? Is Kayla a child she had before Marrying him? What's his beef? He knew what she did before he married her. It was probably why he married her, talk about a hypocrite character. She came home to him when she was finished at "work". Most strippers I know usually are Lesbians and those that aren't are on the pill. They only stop "fooling" around when they want to have babies.

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