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The Ending ....

I enjoyed the story until right near the very end you come out with the stupidest line that just doesn't fit with the rest of the story...You tell us what a beauty Kaye is in quite a few places throughout the story....then you come out with the line Compared to you (Laura) Kaye is an alley cat.....why in the world would Reed say that!

I also loved the story however the ending was a "tell" beyond all belief. Also and alas the "alley cat" reference bothered the crap out of me. Where the hell was your editor when you needed him??

Alley Cats Can be pretty

I loved the story as I love all your stories. I disagree with the comments about being an alley cat, she is a fighter, but fighters can also be hot. Its just a different kind of hot. Look at some of the UFC female fighters they could be described as Alley cats next to models as there is something in their very nature that warns you to stay away.

I don't mind the fact that all your stories follow a familiar theme. That theme is what makes me read them, I like the subtle differences you have in all of your characters in all of your stories and I praise you for your literary works.

One very happy reader

A JOY TO READ

Thank you for this wonderful effort!

One more thing

The term alley cat was for Lauras ears for running to his known enemy and turning her back on him. She also turned Her back on the other two people who loved her. Laura was written as a upperclass woman But, compared to Kaye, Kaye would be the alley cat and for him to prefer Kaye over her was a insult to Laura. Laura and her dishonor toward him and their real friends helped him not to fall to her exterior beauty, she had no interior beauty. Also his remark about the alley cat being his alley cat let her know he had a woman who would stand by his side to the very end With him no matter what he was accused of unlike Laura. I couldn't believe she tried to use the kid card on him. To bad for her the kid was his enemies kid which also made her his enemy too. Was that a joke her trying to use kid card like using the race card

"Alley cat" is not an insult.

It's a description.

The sweetest, most loving and beautiful cat i ever had was a stray kitten i found scrounging around the dumpster at my apartments. She was hall-starved and her long fur was dirty, clumped and patchy.

I took her in, i checked around to see if she belonged to anyone in the apartments ...

She didn't.

So i took her to the vet, had her wormed and got her shots ... she filled back out, her lovely smoky-grey fur filled in, long and fluffy and she loved me an i loved her. She was always happy and loving, but didn't get really strong.

She was about three years old when she just ... ran down.

The vet said it probably was at least partly due to her life before she met me.

But for those years, i had her, she had me, and i knew she was warm and well-fed and happy right up till the end.

So, no - "alley cat" isn't an insult.

Just showing your excellence again

Reading your library again. I had forgotten why I love your stories so much. Someday, maybe I'll be as good as you are. Thanks for writing and allowing me to have the joy of this story. Randi

This is not an erotic story

Beautifully written, yes, but maybe it has the wrong tags. A story with 6 pages and 2 softly erotic paragraphs is not what I'm looking for in "loving wifes". There cattegories for stories where the focus is not on porn

This Has It All

An easy 5-Star rated story and a welcome addition to my Favorites column. I do love revenge stories. And the very best revenge is a successful life and true happiness. And add to that vindication. WOW! I do hope you write more stories of revenge and redemption.

Love and Death

I nearly couldn't stop to read until the end

Gret story!

We DO MISS your stories, kind sir!

Wow

Bloody hell your good aren't you!

Blackjack Proffesor?

I liked your story only thing that turned me off to it was . Why mention Laura? If she had nothing to do with the story other than divorcing him and marrying and having a kid with a man she loathed. At first I thought she would be more involved with the story. I was thinking her and Jason had connived from the onset even marrying Reed to get him out of the way so she could then make sure Jason got the position he coveted but no. She was hardly involved in the story. So again I say why mention her.

Superb. 🏆

There are only about two dozen or so stories on the site that I consider to be as interesting and entertaining as this gem. This is the first work by this author that I have read, but now intend to read each of his/her stories presented here. However, I regret that it has been nearly two years since this author has favored us with more. Can only hope that such talent is still with us and will return.

The very best of literotica - hands down (pun intended)

This is my all time fave, thank you so much for crafting this. I wish I had 1,000th of your talent. Please return with more of your fascinating stories. Thank you

How?

Can a sane man continue to moon over a slut who stabbed him in the back and walked over him. In the middle of the story he should have been over her instead of hoping to get her back. No man would be that o u t of it.

You Are An Exceedingly Gifted Writer

This is the second of your stories that I have read. Both were easy 5-Star reading. Now I am drooling over the next selection I pick from your collection. I would love to see this fleshed out as a paperback novel.

Simply the best

I've just read it for the third time and in a few months I'll read it again.

Wasn't Laura amazingly shallow though?

A complete tale

Only thing I would like to see is Laura suffering a bit more. Can't you get jail time for falsely accusing someone in order to get them fired? It would be hard to separate her participation in the false plagiarism charge and all the clearly illegal blackmailing and sexual abuse that was taking place by her husband. Her behavior doesn't necessarily back up her explanation at the end. What wife would turn so quickly? One that was truly in love, or one that was somehow an accomplice? Not that I really think she was, but I'm not so sure she could so easily walk away without serious investigation. At least a lawsuit against her would be nice.