All Comments on 'Six seconds to impact'

Very nice and subtle content. Very rich. As to form - a prose poem. Well, I read it (several times in fact) and I usually do not - or at least find I cannot read to the end.

I am interested to see more from you.

Is the loud "crack" your neck breaking? (You said your neck was destined to break earlier). More about the neck! Because it's the real point of contact here, and a more cathartic / meaningful expression of unrequited love than some contrived sex / love scene which is never going to happen. Anyone wanting to hear a really sickening fatal neck-crack can check out the unarmed combat scenes in 'The Deep', 'Marathon Man' or 'The Long Kiss Goodnight'. (I always avoid these films for exactly that reason).