Lust Bursts My Bubble

Big dick, more money than god, does whatever he wants no consequence except a slight (and I mean insignificantly slight) bout of conscience which he managed to throw money at to help it go away. Not erotic at all, however, a perfect story about what people are like when there are no or no perceived consequence to actions. Do you think he'd be a likely to chase and keep "the best piece of ass" around if there were consequences his money or power wouldn't be able to sway?

This story isn't hapless.

A lighthearted romp in which a big divorced man bags the snot out of a little married woman.

Wow

Did that skank ever win the lottery. Guess love just can't compete with a big dick and lots of cash.

OK, but ...

So, the guy who generally plays within the rules (and can certainly afford to do so) breaks one into smithereens. All he has to do when Sweetie remembers his off-the-cuff remark (and calls him on it) is to change the task to detailing his Prius, at $100 per job, but paid in advance!

Once the affair starts to unravel her marriage, Our Huge Hero should tell her PART of the truth about his financial status. "Actually, Honey, I have a trust which has recently kicked in! My income, between my salary and my trust, is now 6-figures! I have kept my job because I love the work I do!" Then Sweetie can't let the cat out of the box prematurely AND she won't start changing because of Hero's obscene wealth! The latter is, of course, not that likely because she has already proven that she lusts after him as much as he does her! He does NOT have to mention that his 6-figure statement reflects the high sixes, and that the time frame is NOT annual, but weekly!

I would have preferred hearing a little more about Hubby, whether it would be to commiserate with him or to gloat that he got what he deserved!

Good score

Well worded

Original story fiddled with, typical finish

So if the situation was reversed

And we were looking at it from Jeff's point of view - we'd be outraged! A rich man comes along, seduces and buys Jeff's wife and she leaves Jeff, giving him most all of the assets. Jeff finds out who Kevin really is, outs him and sails off into the sunset with his assets and great new job, but without his wife. A nice story about role reversal, but let me say, for Jeff, Kevin is NOT a nice guy. He should have and deserves to have a bad opinion about his character. And he's about to get married for a third time to a woman you admit doesn't love him and whom he doesn't love. Where's the sense in that? If all he was interested in was good sex he should have tried out a lot more escorts. A hell of a lot cheaper in both the short and long run versus getting married and having a kid. This guy was an idiot. You crossed all the T's and dotted all the I's, but I didn't much like this story.

You've put out some pretty shitty stories in the past but...

... this one may just be your worst. No redeeming qualities whatsoever in either of your central characters. Again, just a downright shitty story.

Good Read***

Thanks for sharing.

That was fun

Stories like this make me smile. Good work! Can't wait for more.

So Many Negatives

it took the pleasure out of the read. sorry, but it was disappointing.

A Rollicking Romp

His self image really had to do a makeover. See, when you have a billion dollars you still can't stop the world. It keeps changing. Hey gang lighten up!

Noir-lite !

Diverting but not substantial read which was the author's probable goal from the get-go. The narrator allowing Ash to get pregnant with his kid is a potentially ruinous decision because putting up with a woman's mercurial nature is hard enough when you're in love with her. But since he's a self-satisfied dilettante, readers will shed few tears over the narrator's fate. Good story-overall that just misses owning 5 star oomph.

correction

"Kevin is going bowling Sunday"

I think you mean "Jeff is going bowling Sunday"