Persuasion

AWFUL STORYLINE*

This story is terrible.

BOTH PARTNERS SHOULD BE AWARE

of what you married, TK U MLJ LV NV

Not new

I've seen this story posted before

SHIT STORY

SORRY BUT YOUR STORY IS OLD BULLSHIT, BADLY WRITTEN AND ABSOLUTELY UNREADABLE. IF THERE WAS A RATING LESS THAN A ONE U DESERVE IT

stories of the mentally ill arent erotic

poor excuses for human beings, need medical assistance rapidly for mental issues

Qui reading at the start. What church does she attend because I would love to hook with a married church going woman

Where their religion allows them so much marital...latitude.

Fucking moron. Go back to your moms basement and jerk off to gay midget porn.

NO LW tale

this is just a sick chuck tale. you can not be called a man. pure trash.

Wrong Category Name

This category needs to be broken up and renamed.

I know the category description gives SOME warning that the name really isn't accurate, but this could make things clearer:

The stories about men who either willingly or allow themselves to be bullied into allowing their wives to sleep around should be in a "Cuckold" section.

Stories where the husbands get revenge should be in a "Vengeful Husbands" section.

"Loving Wives" should be just that, women who go the extra mile for their husbands.

New Category

Literotica needs to establish a new category entitled (Willing Cuckold or Gay married men). Then we would not have to read this crap.

no man here

a man would say no honey I'll get some blue pills and Shag you both

hard to believe

a person can be so fucking stupid to post this crap, people like this make abortion look good.

Will not rate.

Not into the whole willing cuckold thing, and I simply don't understand it. For me to rate this story would be unfair. I know this is fantasy and I believe everyone has a right to fantasize, no matter how much I disagree with it. I can't be objective with this story so I for that reason I will not rate it.

is there one man in England that's not a cuck>???????

I remember when that country had brave and strong men!!! Sad really! No man would put up with this shit. And, no man would agree to what this wife wanted.

I'm sure crap like this is written only to stir people up,

what other reason is there for actually writing down trash like this. I can't believe anyone gave this more than one star on any level.

1*

Another worthless day in loving wives. This category is sinking into the sewer. At least we had a couple of good ones this week. The rest was pure trash. Thanks to the comments, at least I can avoid reading them. To be fair to the writer, at least the tags tell the story. Any story tagged, cuckold, hot wife, infidelity you know its going to be a wimpy cuckold tale.

EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Congratulations!!!!!!!!

Excellent story!!!

Nice.Job Boomerang

Universally bad reviews for a story that belongs in another category or better yet the trash.Boom you can't be naive enough to know your going to get slammed for this.Right? Really bad.This is NOT erotic

Hey, Anon...

....as far as your memory is concerned you may be right, but didn´t you forget something?? In those times you refere to hardly anyone would have put up with this behaviour, true. But those men had enough balls to sign by name, thus deserving every right to critisize.I do not appreciate cuckoldry at all and I would even give a "star" to anyone who clarifies his fetish right at the beginning; But I honestly need to point out that anonymous raging is far worse.
This being said I must point out: I didn´t even read the whole story. There was nothing worthwhile to me.

Stupid

Really should be in fetish what -real- guy really wants his wife to screw around, well he might as well start as well and geee they can then get a divorce; doent sound like she has a lot of respect for him anyway

He Ego Trixi!

I love people like you who hide behind a fake moniker and then bash someone else's opinion Can you spell hypocritical? If you don't like anonymous opinions.then do what you did with this story.Dont read them.Pretty simple is it not? As for this story? Ranks up with the worst ever.Non exotic fetishes drivel

a 1 star

well earned

Just plain awful

I hate stories in which the characters think and behave like they are dumber than rocks. These two fit the bill. And your writing did nothing to help them. Even for fiction, this was such implausible and unbelievable drivel that I'm still laughing at how bad it was. Even a great editor couldn't have saved this mess. A gave you a "1" because negative scores are not yet available.

Stolen Story

This story is a slightly edited theft of:

http://www.literotica.com/s/coinversations

So happy I was forced to read this

What a delightful erotic tease it turned out to be. My wife does this to me all the time in her own way and style. Gets me red hot and panting. What is cruel I know she fucks other men but pretends she doesn't and goes along like I am crazy or something to imagine she does. Her punishment for my jealous attitude is forcing me to read ever LW story on Literotica. Oh happy day this one turned up.

Coinversations!

The same story with Carol from South Africa. Can Boomerang7 also be SexySarah7?

And he next conversation

Heard was the wife and sister in law trying to explain how a chasity cage got shoved up her ass lock included .

as soon as I read this ..."Yeah, well, that won't stop them trying to get into your knickers, will it?"

I knew we were into a British fagggot super wimp story .... all the idiot husband can do is ''' sputtered..."

Typical British spineless man. Worthless story do not write anymore

on your... WINKY???!!!

HahaHAAAAAHHH!

If you were after humiliation, you got it in spades, dude.

See, this is why us Aussies continually beat you in all the sports... BECAUSE YOU'VE GOT NO BALLS TO PLAY WITH!

Just MAN UP and kick her to the kerb, it'd never get this far over here. Glad there's a very big ocean between us.

Never play the other guys game!

If you cannot see where a conversation is going, there are only a few choices. a) Just sit back like a lump and let shit pour all over your dumb ass! b) Say "Cut to the chase! What are you getting at?" c) Don't agree with anything! Stonewall. Especially if you are being fed booze!

Of course, not marrying a woman who has clearly enjoyed her service as the area punchboard would be an even smarter move! But, don't worry too much ... you've been fed many 'strange' cream-pies already, so life will not be that much different!

Waste of time

Not erotic, wrong category (Fetish or BDSM would fit better). Chastity and Fem-Dom seem to be the main themes, when you get right down to it. I can't fathom why? There is reference to his long-held fantasy (and his wife seems to know about it, go figure) regarding wifey fucking other men, but it's never explained why he would find it exciting to have his cock locked up in a chastity device -- it's a fantasy in the author's bio; is this the origin? Hubby certainly can't enjoy any sex that way, unless we are to assume he wants to be a slave and just lick up wifey's cream pies, and then remain in a frustrated state of denial. Yuk. One star.

Enjoyed that

Great dialogue. Love the wife steering hubbie in the direction she wanted!

I wrote several times!

I wrote several times the LW should divide into two hubs:
Stories, where the husbands likes his wives have sex with others (cuckolds, swingers and wife sharing stories) and a second hub for stories where the husbands do not like his wives have sex with others. (revenge, consequence, reconcilation and TLW).

A great story! I hope there is a part 2

Ooooohhh, what a great start

Love stories that have a lot of teasing dialog. Love stories where wife makes hubby lick but not fuck. Love her telling the sister all about it. Love most everything you've done here. Hope there will be a part 2 (and 3, and 4, and ...).

Great Story

I want a woman like her.

Please keep writing....please.

This is how one does it

This is written so well! This is what a good cuckold relationship feels like. She honestly enjoys bigger cocks, and he gets off on her pleasure too. And although he twists over not being that big, she still loves to fuck him.

agree

with F W C go back under ur rock and waste away.
1* only cause I can't erase u from the face of earth

very hot - please keep writing!

as for the guy who wants to 'erase you from the earth' - why the fuck do people like that read these stories if they don't like them? Classic case of denial i reckon..

please continue

You've built a solid premise. I'd like to read more.
Thanks

Forget the cuckold crap. Forget the silly cage part

Forget the wrong category.
The bottom line is that this mess was simply badly done. Poorly conceived. Poorly executed. Not a single original or clever part in it. Not a single decent character in the lot.
The whole story was just plain awful.