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Hidden Talent Ch. 03

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by Anonymous

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by genevievexer05/12/04

I love this series, please continue

I love you hidden talent stories. I love the build-up and the innocence. I wish I had this hidden talent.

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by 10/30/04

Good, but could be better.

I agree with the previous comment that the slow build to sex in this story works well, but it works less well when each part of the story follows the same pattern so exactly. By part three there is no dramatic tension left. We know almost exactly what will happen.

Moliere

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by Anonymous08/16/06

romance not lust

I believe this story is one of lust that turns into love but thats just an opinion

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by Anonymous04/29/11

Lovely

storys about love like this is why I read at litrotica, there just isn't porn like that, about love.

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